ambiguity

I know it could

be so right

i know it would

keep me warm during the nite

but where i am right now

doesnt give me a reason how

this is to be

i know

it is destiny

a feeling so strong

out side of my being

the decideing factor in this vision im seeing

no facts solitified

if i told you

you’d think id lied

but i didnt

because

i havent even said it.

 

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May 2, 2005

Random thought, what happens if you changed the poem to a third person and rewrote it, try it and see how it sounds…