ambiguity
I know it could
be so right
i know it would
keep me warm during the nite
but where i am right now
doesnt give me a reason how
this is to be
i know
it is destiny
a feeling so strong
out side of my being
the decideing factor in this vision im seeing
no facts solitified
if i told you
you’d think id lied
but i didnt
because
i havent even said it.
Random thought, what happens if you changed the poem to a third person and rewrote it, try it and see how it sounds…
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