*random thoughts of you
i dont kno what to say
thoughts of you infest my head
they weigh me down all day
i know you cant comprehend
i cant stop falling into this state
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i dreamt of you again
you danced around in my mind
you made yourself comfortable
excited my nerves
you wont leave
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i’m finally aggrivated
but not
stay please
i like this, you
i’m addicted, infatuated
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youre seeping into my very nerves
infused with you
you’ve destroyed me
caused my the pain i loved
you still hold the pieces
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youre amazing
youre confusing
cant figure what you are
but not mine
i’m alone
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tempting me over and again
melting my insides
so nervous, anxious
dont want this to stop
i’ve given up
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for the first time
i truly feel weak
i’ve become vunerable
beg you humor me
i’m completely at your mercy
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i dont really like this one. has no structure err anything. this was writing a long time ago by me and i was just writing down on paper what was goin thru my mind. kk?? so yea so be too harsh on me. i never really worked with this one.
no i think its good not all poems have to be structured.. but no i wasnt mad its just that this person was calling me “kid” like it was my name and she was makin me mad but i wasnt mad at u i just wasnt sure if u were saying it like it was my name but u werent so its ok… lol i kno im weird about stuff like that! well i g2g luv ya! miss viv
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you say it has no structure. but thats a good thing. the poem gives a small sense of confusion, and with the “lack of structure” it makes it more meaningful. good, i like. but just to let you know, you have the poem posted already, its just shorter (the other one is)……..-dude
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