So, anyway
I have spent three hours today converting the story of Torin’s early years from first person to third person. Oh my dear lord, that’s a tedious thing to do to 184 pages, or whatever the hell it is. I’m not done yet, but it’s coming along. I can do a certain amount of "find/replace", but I can’t "replace all", because there are words in quotes that can’t be changed. So I can change "us" to "them" to a point, but I have to examine each one before I hit the button. And doing certain words (like "my" to "his") before others (like "I" to "he"), instead of going through and retyping each sentence, leaves me with very entertaining sentences, like "I lifted his head and blinked his eyes." When I start to feel borderline insane, I’ll go through a paragraph or two, retyping, editing, polishing and changing as I go, so it’s a very random kind of conversion. It also means that I’m skimming through the story over and over until I’m almost sick of it. Parts of it have been fun to read, though. Those are the ones where I’m actually stopping and redoing entire paragraphs. I get the feel of the story and the characters again. I do like Lordach very much.
I also keep wanting to write about the Folk’s history and how they came to Torin’s world, and started legends in ours on their way through and so on and so forth, but it doesn’t flow as well as I want it to. I may have to write a series of short stories and then tie them together. That might work. I haven’t written in so long, what with life getting in the way and all, but the urge is rising up again, and I know I can discipline myself to writing a few hundred words a day, or rewriting a few hundred more, especially when I have slow work days…like today. It’s a concern, because if I don’t work, I make no money, but I trust that the busy days will outweigh the slow ones, and in the meantime, I can try to take advantage of the slow.
So right now, I’m taking a break from the forest and the boy and the Folk, and hanging out here. I think I might go have some lunch, read a little, play a game, knit four rows on the purse I’m making for my daughter, and then dive back into the conversion of Insanity.
Be well, dear friends.
i want to tell you how much i am enjoying your writing….. happy to be a part of it. *grins at you*
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wow, that’s got to be quite the job, converting. good to see you here 🙂
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I haven’t had a chance to keep up with what you’ve been posting. Maybe I’ll have time later this week.
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Just a little link to The Watcher, for anyone who wants to check out the new story there.
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Be well
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Yay for writing! I’d originally written the first 3 Deviations books in present tense and changed that to past, which was fairly crazy-making.Market here (pro rates) for were stories, if you’re interested:http://fishmonkey.blogspot.com/2010/04/new-anthology.html
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I enjoy your stories. And I can’t help but be amazed at how true you Angels Among Us book is almost true now.
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As crazy-making as this project sounds, I am glad you’re doing it!
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just read the first few entries in the new story at the watcher OD. love it!!!!!
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changing tenses has got to be difficult work for so many pages. i wish you well in doing it. take care,
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Ok I updated! Been away for too long. Missed your stories.
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writing is difficult- I know because I too am writing a book and when it does not flow it takes a lot of energy getting the right word in the right place thank you for dropping by I have placed you on my friends list
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