POEM (056) Full Square
Full Square
Full circled the square,
three-legged a chair,
caught full thrust and fair,
full circled the square.
In front of the behind,
closed off FROM my mind,
from mine to your grind,
close circuit the find.
Flew before these eyes,
uncharted homing skies,
years dissolved lies,
climbing your rise.
My sake myself lost,
your body your mind most,
abuse cowling post,
grilling your head to roast.
Sibling doth my aide,
entwined together half made,
from one to the next adieu,
from myself, me, to you.
Full circled dear sister, a square,
from myself to you, unfair,
one to the other, the mere,
it’s off me, on you, full square.
Ok Ihave to say that this is my favorite poem of yours. Good work man I really enjoyed this and I fully appreciated your rhyme scheme. 🙂
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I like your style, your words carry a certain weight that flows throughout.
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RYN: I guess I could make the poem that I was referring to in the first place public so that you could read it (from 7/5/11). I’ll do that. I don’t really like it, but then you can read what I was talking about, anyways. Also, I liked this one, too. Especially the last two stanzas. Awesome.
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