Striptease

Sexy, Earl thought, very sexy. He was sitting in bed with a book lying open and ignored on his lap, watching Adelaide get ready for bed. She was trying to pretend that she didn’t know he was watching her, but her motions were too deliberate and calculated to tease for her to be totally unconscious of his eyes on her. Adelaide was now straddling the small stool in front of her dressing table clad only in the blue blouse she had worn with her business suit today, a garter belt and stockings. She was slowly brushing her shoulder length black hair. Earl loved her hair. It shone from the vigorous brushing Adelaide had been dishing out as she placed her brush on the dressing table. Without looking back at Earl she took off her blouse, letting it carelessly fall to the floor, and stood up.

Even though they had been married for nearly 18 years, Earl sucked in his breath with appreciation. They had 3 children and Adelaide’s figure was no longer that of the 25 year old vixen he had married, but he loved this riper, mature and Rubenesque woman even more. Adelaide gave Earl a saucy wink which set him to laughing as she twirled and spun her way shamelessly across the room………and into the bathroom.

“Be out before you know it, Stud-muffin – and you better be wide awake and rarin’ to go!!!”

Earl grinned as he settled back onto the bed to wait for Adelaide to join him. He closed his eyes and his mind began to wander back over the years they had been together. So many of their friends had gotten divorced, sometimes more than once, and he contemplated what was different about their relationship.

When they had first met, they were both graduate students full of idealism and themselves. At first, Earl had been put off by Adelaide’s often acid wit and sharp tongue. As their paths continued to cross, however, he was able to see that this was the shield she placed between herself and the world. The challenge of getting inside that wall tantalized Earl, and he slowly worked at stripping away that layer of protectiveness. Finally she shed it, in the first move of an intricate dance of seduction that had lasted nearly 20 years – so far.

They spent more and more time together and Earl began to suspect that Adelaide, ever the model of a strong woman, had a deeply sensitive side as well. Again, he was tantalized by glimpses of another layer and captivated by her as the dance intensified and she stripped that layer away as well.

Adelaide was a brainy one, there was no doubt of that. She earned her living dealing with numbers and statistics and her world was anchored by those things which could be proven and touched. But as Earl pursued his vocation as an expert and professor of world religions, he cam to realize that there was a deeply spiritual layer to this very practical and scientific woman. When he joined stepped into the dance and slowly, sensuously peeled the pragmatic overlay, letting it fall carelessly to the floor, that spiritual layer was there naked to him.

At that point Earl had been sure that he had seen all the layers of Adelaide. But then they had their first child and yet another layer of enigmatic garb was stripped away as the heart and soul of a mother lay radiant and exposed for the very first time.

Though he didn’t realize what was happening, Earl had been totally captured by the rhythm and movement of the dance. He saw glimpses of still more hidden delights in Adelaide’s make-up. There was creativity, the soul of a poet to strip bare and expose. And next…..well, next, he didn’t quite know, but he was sure that he had not seen the final act yet of this most tantalizing and long-lived striptease he had ever witnessed.

“Hey Studley! I’m coming for you!!!” Adelaide called out from the bathroom.

Earl fluffed the pillows, smoothed the blankets, laid his neglected book aside and prepared to lose himself in the dance.

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Mns
February 18, 2000

*applause, applause* enjoyed every delicious morsel of this piece… now, you’re not gonna exclude us out of the next part of this dance? 😉

i hope my marriage is still so vibrant when i’m older…

BBe
February 18, 2000

ahhh, very nice. 🙂

February 18, 2000

Fascinating–every word and scene of that revealing dance!

This is art in its purest form! Oh, how I am taken with this story! Is it hot in here, or is it just me…? Adelaide’s even got my motor going…and I’m gay!! LOL Love + Hugs,

I see the muse is loose with you lately. Very nice entry. Very nice. 🙂

You genuinely sweep along your readers with your fantasies. Wow!

Hi Sweetheart! If Earl was wearing a kilt, I hope he has it off by now!! Nice, romantic narrative of a long lasting love affair between two very lucky people!! You write very well!! Impressive!!!

What was he reading?

Fanny myself…(sigh)

uh…sorry…I meant ‘fanning’ myself. Your story had me so distracted, that I can’t spel. Bye…have to go take a cold shower now.

I lost count…how many layers did Earl strip off Miss Adelaide?

Great writting, felt like I was watching from inside of their bedroom as you told this tale. Oh my, I have been transported. You write and speak of true love well my friend, keep the stories coming!

Thank you for your comment. I guess I’m not the only one who pleads for better manners.

wow… Rich even looked away from the soccer on TV as I read that out to him!

February 20, 2000

Ah, I think I’ve answered one of my own questions… This is lovely. The reality of love in maturity is a pleasant surprise for many of us.

did someone turn on the lights, or did I forget to wear my sunglasses? LOL This is beautifully written, Sunshine! Speaking of layers, you have quite a few yourself, now don’t you!

Nice writing, and interesting color combo here….it works!

This is great. A new name Studley-do-right!

In a world where love like this is so rare. Beautiful…**HUGS**

A stud muffin, my favorite kind of guy. great writing

February 22, 2000

*smiling* you do this so well, sunshine 🙂

February 22, 2000

If you don’t do something with your creative writing, SW, I will be severely miffed at you. Ok, I’m over my tantrum. Great writing, mon amie.

I love this. U write very well. I just hope my love life is that wonderful after 20 yrs of marraige. Love ya, KIDD J and CYBER KIDD (nsi)

Great writing Sunshine… ah to have love at so many levels, erh, I mean layers. Anyways…Thanks- :O) Respectfully–

Love the story … the colors, on the other hand … WOW that’s some bright yellow!XOXO

February 27, 2000

::smiling at the Dance:: I like this very much. With a happy nod…

Ahhh… I love her attitude! And could just picture this as you wrote it.. beautifully written! 🙂

HEY, now i know how to find romance. Sunshiney will you write a story for me? 🙂 Frogs in love? 🙂 Frogtastic! Wonderful job.

Dang, getting a note or two? 🙂 Peace and love, mature love, not sleepy love, patient love, sweet love, thoughtful love, erect and persistent love, giving love, fragrant love too,

Now that is an incredible story! Bravo to you Sunshine!

:: remembering to breath:: loved how things got better with time…