Sunshine Wolf
May 5, 2002

A Circular Ditty

The sun goes up
and the rain comes down.
Inside my house
the carpet’s brown.

The carpet’s brown,
and her radio’s on.
Chickie’s radio blares
from dawn to dawn.

From dawn to dawn
I count my pennies.
Why do I worry?
I haven’t any.

I haven’t any
friends named Tex.
Not to mention
I ain’t gettin’ no sex.

I ain’t getting’ no sex.
Some days I curse.
But what the heck
It could be worse.

It could be worse
Just look around.
The world could be flat
instead of round.

Instead of round
the peg could be square.
Now how’s it gonna
fit in there?

Fit in there?
I wish I could.
But I can’t
It’s just no good.

It’s just no good
to keep this up.
As the rain comes down
And the sun goes up.

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Torin Invanusson
May 6, 2002

Oh, good. You’re alive. Insane, but alive. With a huge relieved hug…

Ahh… love it! You’re a poet! 🙂

A real nice smile maker! {:o)

😉 Uncle Gnome (nsi of course)

hee hee hee hee heee!! 🙂

oops, Lisyl, nsi^

Luna
May 6, 2002

You know, there is some technical term for this kind of poem, but I can’t remember what it’s called. It’s s’posed to be really hard to do. Bet you didn’t know that … and I probably shouldn’t have told you. Heh! You CREATE the most amazing stuff, Miss Sunny W. 🙂

that was great! LOL 🙂

Very clever!

sometimes i enjoy the rain coming down.

clever!! thanks for your nice notes. hugs

lifeisuhmistury
May 6, 2002

What a cool poem/ditty…I loved it and read it out loud to my librarian friend Vicki…we both laughed…no one else was in here,one of the nicer things about a small town library!What are you gonna do with your job offer/possible move? Still mulling it around? Best to you and yours and you know what? You are a total goofball and I love you for it!Thanks for the grin!(((HUGS)))

You are surely mistaken as I am quite sure the world is flat. Very flat. If not all the snakes would fall off on the other side. Love all your notes for which ah thanks yee.Alexias

Corny enough to be cute.

Robert Lee
May 6, 2002

That is brilliant.Reminds me of Forrest Gump,”Sometimes the rain even goes up.” LOL.Guess what?I have a new favorite to add in my diary, : )

ermentrude
May 7, 2002

Brilliant!! Circular poetry 🙂 And it scanned so much better than mine!! Must have been a poetice weekend 🙂

WELL – send the rain here, and send chickee too, she can babysit for the four six year olds across the street and give me some rest. 🙂 Yesterday pot roast, today, i think today fried toes, er chicken, yeah, that’s it. So is you in hotland or hotlanta? MAN we need rain, it’s been days and i’ve even waved my amulet.

The Watcher
May 7, 2002

RYN at T’s: It’s tuckering me out just writing about all that running. Time for a change of pace. With a grin…T the U, signed in here, predictably, as

Willy & Wilma
May 7, 2002

That’s a cute circular ditty. Maybe life will pick up for you in Florida with more people & parties

What is this word..”sex”? People have it???;)

LOL!

lovingly good 🙂

BRAVA 🙂 i love it 🙂

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