A VERY big departure from the norm……
This is an entry VERY different from what I normally write. It is not for the faint at heart. very graphic, in fact…….
Let me give some background first. Most of you know that my husband and I don’t actually see eye to eye on things…putting it mildly. Well, he went away for a training class, he was gone from Sun – Wednesday night. While he was gone, he called or e-mailed me asking for me to "write" to him, he wanted all these flowery, words of undying devotion. to me that is a farce right now. So I started writing an e-mail, kidding around about him being in the room and hearing a knock on the door. I was pretty much insinuating that he would have one of his internet "friends" visiting" him while he was away. Well, I LOVE to write and usually write poems and short stories strictly for my own entertainment…not many people actually see what I have written. Well, before I had even wrotten 3 lines, this e-mail took on a life of its own and became a "story". An erotic one at that, which I have never written before. I have no idea where the ideas came from, but the words just flowed out like molten lava. So here it is, for your reading pleasure. Do let me know what you think…….
SO, you’re all alone in your nice hotel room. Peace and quiet reigns. You have control of the TV and MY computer. Life is good. Wait……there’s a knock at the door….room service? NO…not yet, you haven’t ordered yet. AHHHH….she’s here. You check to make sure the roses are looking good and the champagne is properly chilled…as are the glasses….<how utterly CUTE!!!!!.> You stop at the large antique mirror that hangs on the wall to make sure you look good. You take a deep breath and let it out slowly…….you know that this night is going to change you completely. You are about to step into the unknown, jump in with both feet, without benefit of a parachute. Step outside the box, step outside the norm and follow your heart. Grab the brass ring for all your worth. You are ready, you have been ready, this moment has been a long time in coming, and you want it so badly.
Another knock…louder and quicker now, a bit impatient…that thought makes you smile with a sense of relief, she’s anxious too. And that is a good thing, you know that she wants this as much as you do.
You open the door and are greeted with a smile that lights up your heart, you can’t help but smile back in pure delight. Within seconds her lips reach yours as you hungrily devour each other. Small moans and soft murmuring that are meaningless are the only sounds that fill the air around you, that and the sound of your heart breaking free from your chest and soaring up, away into the night in ecstasy. Your arms draw her closer and then closer still. You can’t seem to get as close as you want to be, as close as you NEED to be. With regret you pull your lips away from hers even as hers are still reaching for yours. With a soft gentle kiss on the tip of her nose, you ask her to come into the room and spend the night in your arms. With your hand on her hip you guide her into the room, put the DO NOT DISTURB sign on the outside knob, shut the door, lock it and slide the bolt across. With one quick movement you pull her body close to you as you begin the dance of lovers. Your bodies sway in tune to music that only the two of you can hear. The kisses get more urgent and forceful, more of a need now, you need to become a part of her, your bodies grind against each other. Your hands are in her hair, then they slide down her back and come back up to the breasts that are spilling out of her blouse. God, you love her breasts, they are large, firm and so beautiful to you, you could lose yourself in her breasts. Your hands slowly undo the buttons and with great care, you slide her blouse down her arms and off. You then reach behind her and unclasp her bra. As that follows the blouse to the ground, you look into her eyes as your hands find there way to those sensitive nipples that are so dark and round. As your fingers gentle tug and twirl them she gasps and asks you to please suck on them, please she needs your mouth on her so bad. Of course you acquiesce and do as she asks. Her body trembles and her breath starts coming in gasps which only fuel your own desire. Soon, she is panting with desire as she grinds her hips into yours with an urgency that is palpable. You push her up against the wall as you slowly tear your lips away from her breasts which are now heaving with exertion and need. You slowly and deliberately trail kisses down her stomach to her belly button. There you plant little soft kisses around the perimeter of her belly button and then before she knows it, you are licking and sucking her there. When it all becomes to much for her, her body starts to act on it’s on, she thrusts back her head and arches her back as your tongue plunges into the hole in her belly and begins to make love to her there. Her whole body is twitching and moving with a desire like she’s never known before. "Oh God," she says, "I feel like I’m going to come right now." You smile up at her and say, "Not yet, my darling, I haven’t gotten to the good part yet." You slowly work your way back up to her breasts with your tongue. Your hands quickly take off her very short skirt and she steps out of it as your eyes light up at the sight of the thigh high stockings she is wearing as you notice the absence of underwear. Slowly you bend your head towards her love zone as you softly say, "oh baby, I’m going to have so much fun down here." Your breath getting closer and closer to her heat causes her to arch herself once more towards your face which is slowly coming closer and closer to the object of your desires and her great need. You plant a kiss on her cleanly shaven mound and then just as she is about to lose all control, you start to kiss the inside of her knees. First one, then the other. You run your tongue up and down her inner thighs and soon her legs are trembling as is her whole body. It is alive with desire. She grabs your head and tries to bring you to her, but you only laugh and say, "Not yet, my pretty." She laughs as you stand up and kiss her full luscious lips. Licking and sucking the lip gloss off. "Mmmmm cherry," you say. "I like cherries." So there she stands with her arms around you and yours around her and your tongues entwined in each others mouth, wearing only the heels and the thigh high stockings now. She laughs and says,"Oh really, well two can play at this game, my darling." Quickly she takes off your shirt and plants kisses around your nipples, she sucks, tugs and twirls them as you did hers. No one has ever done that for you before and you are caught up in the feelings as she continues to play with your now very sensitive nipples. For the first time, you are fully aware of them as you have never been before. "Yes, yes, oh yes" you say as her fingers play with one nipple and her mouth devours the other. You are now arching your body towards hers. Thrusting yourself forward, wanting release.
Her hands are on your pants, the zipper is firmly in her grasp as she tugs it down. You are both gasping for breath and for release as she pulls your Calvin’s down around your feet. Your penis, firm, stands tall and proud before her eyes. Drops of cumm are already working themselves down the shaft. Your eyes start to glaze over with this terrible need. You want to thrust yourself into her mouth, but won’t, you don’t know if she wants to. "Please," is all you can say to her. She look up at you and smiles knowingly. "I know what you desire and have desired for a long time. I am so glad I am going to give you your first blow job." Before your mind can even wrap itself around the words you just heard, she takes your shaft in her hands, smiles and then takes your penis deep into her mouth. Every now and then she smiles up her you. Her deep dark eyes are pools of desire and love. This is her gift to you. Your breath comes quicker and your body takes over, it has a mind of its own……Your are thrusting into her mouth, her hands are milking your penis for all it’s worth and her mouth…that gorgeous mouth of hers is sucking you and playing with the head of your penis, You start to pull out, but she won’t have it and takes you even deeper in to her mouth. She nods her head…NO and you finally give in and let the loving take it’s course. You thrust and she receives, deeper and faster, your hands are on her head, pulling her closer and then you feel it, the sweet, sweet release, Your body jerks as all that hot white cream comes rushing out of you into her hot ready mouth. She sucks and swallows and sucks some more as you have the most mind boggling orgasm of your life. Just as you feel like you are empty she sucks in big time and once again you release with a cry and a moan. You stand there with your hands and head against the wall, holding on for support. You can’t believe what just happened. You look down at her, your beautiful dark love and she still has your penis in her mouth, Licking and cleaning you off, looking at her with some of your cumm on the corners of her mouth, and seeing the love that shines for you in her eyes, you realize that you are completely and hopelessly in love with her. When your breathing is less labored, you take her hand and pull her to her feet. You look deep into her eyes and with tears in yours, you say, "Baby, I don’t know how to thank you for what you just did." "I don’t know what to say or how to say it." You have given me the most wonderful gift in the world, and now I want to return the favor." "Now it’s my turn to pleasure you." With that, you bring her over to the bed and sit her down. As you kneel at her feet, you slowly work those stockings down her legs to her ankles. You take off her shoes and then her stockings and leave a trail of kisses up and down her legs. Your hands are on her breasts and she is again moaning with desire. You stop for a moment and say, " I want to taste us together>" With a quick flick of your tongue you lap up her juices and then kiss her. The taste of the juices together drive you both wild with desire and the kisses increase in intensity. Her body is beginning to buck now in earnest. You take time to pay homage to her breasts with your mouth. Then on to her belly button again where she once again gets overly excited. Then you go right for the heart of the loving. Her box of joy. Your tongue dances around her clitoris, up and down and the around and around. Your tongue and fingers plunge into her sweet dripping wet pussy. She falls back onto the bed with a little cry and you continue to tease and torment that little hooded pleasure nob, until she is writhing about all over the bed. Her body is pumping up and down, pushing herself into your face as your tongue now licks the entire length of the pussy. Your 5 o’clock beard tickles her inner thighs and pussy lips. You put your hands on her hips and draw her to you as your tongue goes further and further inside her. You lick her from anus to pussy, and then your tongue finds its way into her anus and she gasps with surprise and pleasure. You play with her, you tease her. She doesn’t know where your mouth and tongue will be next, plunging into her ass or sucking her clitoris. Her body is a mass of nerve endings that are in need of release. The climax is building faster and faster until finally with a cry she find your own sweet release under your tongue, lips and mouth. "Oh my God." she says, "I’ve never cumm like that before." You look at her and say."It’s only the start baby." As you stand up she notices your erection and pulling you onto the bed and moving up to the head of the bed, she says, "And I see you need to have that taken care of again." You smile and say,"Baby, I want to make you mine tonight, completely mine." You rub the head of your penis against her still throbbing clit and ask her to let you have her……no barriers, no stopping, no pulling out, you want her completely. "I know I don’t have the right to ask this of you, I’m not your husband, but I want you." She looks at you and again you are surrounded by the love that radiates from her eyes and says, "Sweetheart, you DO have the right, I give it to you gladly, along with my heart." With one hand she pulls you down to her and with the other she takes your penis and guides it into her pussy and whispers, "Welcome home baby." You lie atop of her in silence and awe at the tremendous gift she has given you and then begin the dance of love. Your lips on hers, on her breasts, everywhere….. you make love to her, body and soul. When you have both reached your orgasms, you lie next to each other and look at each other in wonder. You look at her pale hand that is now on her dark breast and can’t believe how your life has changed. You look deep into her eyes and tell her that there is something she needs to know and understand. "I love my wife and I love my children, I don’t know what is going to happen in our future, but you need to know that I have never in my life meant these words like I mean them now…..I love you, I am in love with you and I’ll always be in love with you." "Oneday, we will be together, I promise you that, we will be together." And then you say, "I want you to have my baby." She smiles at you and tenderly rains kisses on your face and says,"Oh my darling, I feel the same way, I love you like I have never loved anyone before." "I feel like we have been together in many lifetimes." "I know we will one day be together, I know we will cause pain to others, but I’m afraid that is unavoidable." "We will try and make it easier for them, but a love like this cannot be denied, it would be wrong" :"We can’t live a lie, it’s not fair to us and more so it’s not fair to our spouses, they deserve to find a love like this too." Don’t worry Baby, we’ll make it work." Cuddling each other close, secure in there newly admitted love for each other, they fall asleep in each others arms.
Until the knocking on the door wakes them up………… to be continued….
Hey, you go girl 🙂 Let the writing take you where ever it will .. or where you want to go. Hope you and your man enjoyed it.
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I’M SPEECHLES!!!!!
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LOL OMC…after I read what I wrote I was speechless too….
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i’m all hot and bothered. *big smiles*
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Thank you for the note, it’s been a while I’ve missed you…*smiles* I will come back later today to read your entry when I can sit down and take my time. Please don’t be a stranger….
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GREAT writing…is there a part 2?
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