Exist

Well, I figured since I copied Stone Sour’s stuff, I’d put up something that I HAVE written. It’s called Exist.

How much can I take?

How far can I go?

Being pushed to reach high

Yet looking below

If I try hard enough

Can I find something real?

Beyond what I sense

And beyond what I feel?

Seems so hard to grasp

What is said to be key

Like love and belief

Are both foreign to me

Just in my mind

Can I really see

Thats where I know

How I ought to be

Here I know how to love

Heres where I can believe

Its where I can see

More than just what is me

And yet as in life,

As in some cruel game

What I see in here

I cannot attain

This is where Im caught

Between dark and light

I exist in this space

Between death and life

This is very well written, you should be proud of yourself.

ahhh the humanity! what were you going through to write this, must have been some real shit! i like it though. i have also been there too. it’s hard to crawl back out of that kindof hole. but somehow we do, just to fall back in again like we were unaware of it in the first place. Later.

Beautiful. The final two lines are very powerful.

Pre-Ex-Girlfriend

December 20, 2002

Hey there Jaimie Joel! Wow!!! Is that a new one? It ROCKS! I dont remember ever seeing it before tho. But either way I love it. You are SO talented!! RYN:Not a whole lot is up since we talked last night! I’m about to read an email from YOUR brother..shocker eh? I’m glad your not mad at me! Sorry to bring up bad memories for you. I’ll never do it again! luv!