Please critique some of my lyrics?
Monster
i cant say that its gone
I thought that I moved on
but the monster inside of me is still so strong
and I wish I could be everything I’m not
getting overwhelmed by the things I want
because every morning and every night
its myself I’m always trying to fight
because this monster inside of me is taking over
and now the weight of the world is on my shoulders
voices in my head in my head
monsters under my bed
I don’t listen to my heart
because my thoughts feel so sharp
the monster inside of me
makes it so hard to breathe
and I wish I could be everything I want
getting overwhelmed by the things I am not
because every morning and every night
its just myself I always have to fight
till I’m alone and all on my own
and now the monster inside of me
is holding on so tightly
and I might just be my own worst enemy.
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