Please critique some of my lyrics?

Monster

i cant say that its gone

I thought that I moved on

but the monster inside of me is still so strong

and I wish I could be everything I’m not

getting overwhelmed by the things I want

because every morning and every night

its myself I’m always trying to fight

because this monster inside of me is taking over

and now the weight of the world is on my shoulders

voices in my head in my head

monsters under my bed

I don’t listen to my heart

because my thoughts feel so sharp

the monster inside of me

makes it so hard to breathe

and I wish I could be everything I want

getting overwhelmed by the things I am not

because every morning and every night

its just myself I always have to fight

till I’m alone and all on my own

and now the monster inside of me

is holding on so tightly

and I might just be my own worst enemy.

 

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July 31, 2022

I absolutely love this