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June 20, 2020

I like!!! 😃 Vivid imagery, lots of literary detail, the analogies. I enjoyed this! Damned cliffhanger  LOL. AND… if your **cat** went and got comfy up behind you, with that contented expression in his face, it means this IS quality material  😸

DEFINITELY Sofia, cure the cliffhanger!

June 20, 2020

@thenerve

I was actually thinking of a different spot to read the part about Sophia.  The first chapter is key, but I don’t want to any farther into that part of the story so I was going to hit it up at another part of the story.  Yes, and so far it seems to be Sophia.  Thanks for liking the imagery and the writing.  Yes, that is Pawz!!!  Yep, cat face means quality material.  Well, I’m glad you enjoyed it and there is more to come.  Thanks for letting me know!

June 22, 2020

@thenerve

After some thought, I do think I will be going a little more into the introduction.  But it will be after I cycle through the characters.

June 22, 2020

@raphaeltiriel – Damn you LOL

June 24, 2020

@thenerve

haha, I wanna introduce some more of the characters before I delve a little more that way.