i’ll always remember to forget about you
a while ago, i read a poem & the last line was “But science explains it all.” & i wondered what was so bad about it. I’m not a poet, but while bored one day, I wrote this down. I really only like the last 3 lines, but eh. I’m not good at judging this sort of thing, so what do you think?
so tell me, love
why equations and theories can’t be
poems made up of numbers & variables
instead of words.
& why can’t a love
explained in chemistry and physics
be just as romantic as one described in sonnets
by shakespeare or blake?
& why shouldn’t an anatomically
correct diagram of the human body
hang in museums next to a
watercolor woman who doesn’t even
have all her parts identified?
even when reduced to wavelengths & atmosphere
the sunset still inspires
and knowing that stars are just balls of gases
burning light years away
never stopped me from wishing on them.
notes are good everywhere. <3
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I typically have an aversion to all things scientificBut my dear you made it beautiful*grins*wonderful.love
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the picture is beautiful.. the poem, scintillating… and I too wish on those balls of gases as well.. xoxox Jezsyka
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that’s a very unique poem
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the last three lines were beautiful,but so was the rest of it. :)laura
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gorgeous…and something i have thought about a lot as well. knowing how emotions and other things work scientifically does not decrease the wonder…actually, in myself it usually inspires more wonder. *hug* amazing, darling
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i absolutely love that. what’s it from?
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that was cooldid you write it?absolutely brillinat! =0D
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that was… stunning. <33 -meg
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random note// I love the poem.-
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i loved that.ryn; my lj username is cherry_starsmuch love xx;
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wow..its awesome.. my name on here is: NIKKISIXXPICKUPSTIX
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fish creep me out.sorry.xox,
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saw your name, gave a cheer, and here i am! lol. even though im totally opposite anything scientific, i love this poem and how it comes around, its beautiful. did you write it? i’m
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