I Will Surrender

Flowers blooming in the warm spring sun,

Lovely smelling blossoms fill the air,

The sound of falling water is music,

As your voice draws me near,

I will surrender my heart to you.

The green glade brings tears of joy,

A gentle breeze lifts laughter high,

No dark shadows yet seen,

You whisper sweetness into my ear,

I will surrender my soul to you.

Butterflies spread colorful membranes,

A mocking bird whistles a joyous tune,

The sun cast rays of light through fickle clouds,

Your gentle caress pulls me closer,

I will surrender my lips to you.

Following the forest trail together,

The smell of crushed leaves is refreshing,

Pausing to enjoy the moment,

Gathering me into your arms,

I will surrender my body to you.

I will give my all to you, this I swear.

But in return I ask but one thing,

Love me always.

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July 23, 2010

nice visual waltz! I’m glad to read something up tempo for once 🙂

July 23, 2010

For a man to really love a women,he needs to hold her til he knows how she needs to be touched You’ve gotta breathe her – really taste her Til you can feel her in your blood N’ when you can see your unborn children in her eyes Ya know ya really love a woman

July 24, 2010

nice poem. thank you for your note. i’m not a nice guy though, or i wouldn’t keep getting hurt. i’m doing something wrong to upset people and cause them to walk away from me. thank you though. be well. ~Michael