Without words, she told me…
Hardly a breath, but still, I felt it. A slight tremor, not much more than a soft gasp, deceivingly undistinguishable, yet it told me all that I needed to know; all that I wanted to hear.
That one incredibly delicious sigh of surrender pulled us both to the boundary of swirling abandon. It was now the time to choose between either fear or liberation. It was the moment to risk being human or to flee back behind our protective walls.
Without hesitation, we welcomed the plunge over the edge.
The deeper we fell into the whirlpool of passion, the closer we came to touching each other’s soul.
When the morning opened it’s eyes and looked down upon our spent bodies, there was nothing left to hide between the two of us. We now belong to each other in a secret memory, written on the stones of eternity.
Hardly a breath…but, it was all that I needed to know.
Take care.
I’m absolutely speechless.
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Wow.
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Wonderful :::big smile::
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Incredible..
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very nice!
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Superbly done MLM, capturing an all too rare moment. Im glad you are writing again. RYNs – you know – your sense of humor is so much like mine I think we would be laughing our butts off all day if we ever had a few beers. The pecker comment was perfect! About that chicken lady – you should have told her to ‘pluck off’ Take care!
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For some reason, this entry doesn’t show on my favorites list (it only shows your last entry) – glad I decided to check back here anyway! =) Such a lovely entry…and certainly sounds to me like you’re doing quite well! Be well, dear man! =)
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RYN: Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed that entry – it was written with a very heavy heart at the time (I think I’m becoming a sap, LOL). Anyway, you should know by now how much I cherish your opinions!! ~HUGS~ Oh, and can’t wait for your next entry! =)
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Two of your writings… “The throwaway girl” and “retribution” lead me to this statement: Time to write a book. Think about it
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mmmmm sigh. You have grown since those days of saving grasshoppers haven’t you? Lessons learned and a man made better simply by living his life. I love how you express yourself. It gave me grasshoppers. oh no wait. It gave me butterflys. yea, that’s it. mmmmmmm I love those butterflys.
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I added you to my buddy list. Is your old name “Writer962” gone?
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(6/18/06) HAPPY FATHER’S DAY, DEAR FRIEND!!!! =)
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