day light

awareness descending, a
rapid rainfall
suggests a rhythm
remniscient
of a lighter load to carry
shared: joy doubled
and suffering halved
a fear lodged firmly
between here
and afar
i don’t know where you are

an accosted sense of certainty:
left
with only desire …
vague, yet unrelenting
it speaks at length
of virtue
gnawing where it’s worn
held
fast and tightening –
behold
the severity of dawn.

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August 18, 2009

this is wonderful

August 26, 2009

dawn brings two things. relief that the night is over and the vsions deplete with the rising of the sun. yet it also brings remorse for the things that are done but can’t be undone. xx