Not Gilligan’s Island
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"Not Gilligan’s Island"
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Thoughts are frayed
a myriad of rope
each strand holds within potential hope
hanging, waiting, in chaotic fashion.
Perched against a palm tree
separating, sorting, tying up loose ends
my spirit transcends
providing a light.
Dear water baby
swimming by moonlight
my rescue might be lingering
but do not fret
the ocean’s arms will guide
I can see you
I can hear you
the rope will bring you to me.
Grains of sand
blanket my skin, tickling my toes
the sun kissing my nose
skipping, jumping, I am on my way.
A warm breeze whispering in the air
swirling, echoing in my ear
telling me there is nothing to fear
forward, I step.
Dear water baby
grab a-hold of the line
and do not fret
I will hold you in my arms
I can feel you
I can love you
the beginning was always within me…—
By: Sun © 2005
Sun Note- peaceful day thus far…an extrodinary and joyous peace…"Live your life with arms wide open"
…sidenote…did anyone else know that it is freaken wednesday?!….did anyone care to let me know this…lol…fully thought it was tuesday…..strange…oh well…welcome wednesday…woo woo…
*hands you a calendar*
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i <3 your poems.
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I like the title…I love pop culture references and showing that real life isn’t like tv…well done…
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ryn: thanks so much! glad you enjoyed it! I love this piece; to me it invoked memories and expectations of finding more lost pieces of myself. Beautiful imagery, thank you 🙂 PS– one of my friends lost a day this week, too. must be going around. Peace, Love, and Anarchy! 🙂
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Beauty. Reminded me of California or Rhode Island on a sunny day…which is rare, actually. *smile* I’ve read a few of your poems before in a kick of boredom. You’re very…versatile. 😀
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he he..Hicalendars really can be useful-they are to me! Wow, u have been here a while, and u still keep writing… u have not changed, that’s for sure…i luv it! Anyway, im someone who used to come by quite often–that was a longggg time ago (it seems) And i think u just might remember me–but then again, maybe not cuz u have had LOTS of fans in the past couple years! Glad to come by again. cya!
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RYN: Hah! Thanks! I actually wanted people to be reminded a bit of Roman times. The days of Christ. That was the gospel of my own little religion. *laughter* *sigh* Anyways. Thank you for saying you like my front page. I worked hard on it and I’m glad you appreciate it. Yes, insomnia can be good and bad sometimes. Ya gotta love those twisted ideas. ^^
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