…lost…
left alone…
my head so full…
…so full of clouds
my thoughts unclear
not mine somehow…
try to ignore
yet embrace them somehow…
my heart is strong
but it pains me now…
my soul grows tired
everyday
wandering and lost…
can you show me the way?
…take a breath…
close my eyes…
every time i wake
i begin to die…
this is not me
…so who am i…?
That is a powerful poem. I really like it.
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This is very beautiful and painful and I wish I knew the answer because I’m still searching for myself.
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Man, I’m perma-lost. 🙂 I love your poems.
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🙂 aw thanks lol. I like being a favourite of anything! 🙁 I wish I could smoke with you cos that’s so sad. This one’s for you man.
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Very beautiful. And touching at the moment with all that I’m going through. Thank you for sharing this hun. -hugs-
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awww 🙂
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That’s a great poem! I feel lost in my life right now, too… I think I’m going through a quarter-life crisis! 🙂 RYN: Thanks! I always get up when the sun rises to head up to the gym before work. That schedule’s been working pretty good for me so far.
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i love this poem. so much to say…but i need to sleep. ryn: the things that sucks about the headband to hair tie thing is that…head bands come in packs of 4 and i’m notorious for losing hair ties so i loved those 50 packs of hair ties!
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Yes and no. I think I just wanted somewhere to put my special things. Haha, silly I guess. But I’m jealous of you. Like you write good entries cos you don’t write all the time. Well I constantly write. And I want the pretty or writing in general to be all together, in it’s own pretty little place. Lol, how weird am I? But what’d you think of it? It’s kinda scattered I imagine.
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If you’re interested in reading it, I could email you. I say this cos I need feedback and don’t trust my friends. Lol. I crave critics on my writing. Remember I think it’s 7th season of family guy (I’m assuming you watch it) ans Peter is branding a cow. The cow gets on some dominatrix gear. Shit. That’s me with critics on writing. Be brutal. Lol. If you want. I’m not gonna force you, lol.
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