Sally

Sounds like Sally needs some water wings… =) LMAO! 😉 Mathias

Beautiful. I really like this and would like to memorize it.

You memorize my friend, while I sing it. What a beautiful bride wedded to the Ocean! Fabulous poem indeed!

This one brought tears to my eyes.

Sounds rather sad for Sally. RYN: Yes, Judy Garland was born to sing “Somewhere Over The Rainbow”. None better in my opinion. Thanks for your note. ; )

Thanks a lot for such a touching poem. I’m singing it now with a sad tune. Thanks for the note and for your constant encouragement. Have a good night!

ryn: normally name changes.carry over on bookmarks/friends list, not old notes, though the names will still be connected. just so you know, I change my OD name often. mood/life circumstances. normally something sticks in my head, in this case, a song, and I change my name to reflect it.

I.don’t get this poem. s: Is the sea literal? I take it she’s dead in it? suicide/murder? or is the sea imagery for like depression? over a break up(used to walk hand in hand, now alone?). where you thinking of the tongue twister sally sells seashells? I’m just curious of the story you’re trying to tell here/what you were thinking.

I.don’t get this poem. s: Is the sea literal? I take it she’s dead in it? suicide/murder? or is the sea imagery for like depression? over a break up(used to walk hand in hand, now alone?). where you thinking of the tongue twister sally sells seashells? I’m just curious of the story you’re trying to tell here/what you were thinking.

Aww this is beautiful~ RYN: I guess that is indeed true! (*^^*) <3 ~~~>

RYN: How do I see her? I don’t. I don’t see imagery unless it’s spelled out XD. And there is nothing above that describes how she might look. I might just be very dark or very literal. maybe both. “then alone we walk no more.. Sally became all sad and blue.. beneath the waves is where she’ll be” Those lines in particular led me to those feelings. __ “HowI see it well that might ruin your imagery” I don’t understand writers who say that. Don’t you write to tell a story? a scene? a feeling? Do you not want people to see what you see? What I mean is. I can imagine a life. I read to imagine someone elses idea of a life. If that makes sense? To see what others see, their view. I know it’s impossible to see things exactly like they do, and we all change things to our perception in some way. But, thats what I read for, to see others ideas/views. And if they bring out a character, I try not to picture them, until that character is described. So yes, I’d like to know what you were thinking XD. _______ as to a picture, eventually, maybe. and writing… well, that requires a certain mood, or someth

Very beautiful,Sally the mermaid.