a woman
I want to kiss someone smart
who reads, thinks and likes fine art
a girl who has a holistic view
of the world, the sky,me and you
I want the girl who holds my hand
to speak her mind and have a plan
when she looks into a mirror
there is confidence and no fear
I wants the woman who can express her love
can kick my ass but be a dove
who tells the truth even though it hurts
and can be honest without the dirt
If I find a woman like her
one thing that I know for sure
if I want that gal forever
I’ll need to get my shit together
Yes you will! LOL! Great poem hun. 🙂 RYNS: I love anything macabre! Kindred spirit indeed! I’ve only been able to get into OD now. It’s been down for me all evening. I got a message saying the site was being worked on by the DM from the DM. I think it’s going to always be here. But the DM may need to realize more maintenance needs done more often. I think you should check out prosebox too. I’m over there under the same diary name. Get your poems backed up, don’t make the mistake I made. I lost ALL my poems when my computer crashed. I still grieve for their loss.
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Lol.. If I want to be a gal like that I will want to get my **** together too..
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This is so great!
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Thank you, Derek. I had a feeling that you would like that; seems to be right up your alley. I’ve got more for you. 😉 Best of regards, Friend.
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Your sweet and so clever. I bet you wrote your poem “A WOMAN” about me!!! Am I vain or what?
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Flattery will get you everywhere. Loved your poem A WOMAN This is definitely one of my all time favorite.Yes you must get your **** together first but I beg you please do it in near proximity to a very large toilet.
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I hope you find her, or she finds you. ; )
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Wow she sounds hot!! 😉
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Lead me to that girl now And I will say WOW I’ve been waiting so long for such a kiss Which I really do miss Your poem ignite the flame of love And made me fly above Thanks a lot for sharing And for such a sublime writing. Have a nice day!
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You could find one like that. 🙂
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R: Thanks for the note. You’re such a sweetie for taking care of your mom like that. I’m sure it’s hard as hell and I couldn’t do it.
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Hi. You’re now added.
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Thank you. I’m glad you like it. I love your poetry. I’ve never been able to write a decent poem, in my life. But, yours is very well written.
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Ryn: promise???! 🙂
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Beautiful poem btw.
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*Applauds* As always an amazing taste lingers after reading your words -The demon wolf
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I love it!!!!! it’s so sweet and genuine
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Normally the poetry I find on OD is clumsy and bothersome. Not this though. This I actually really like. Good job.
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Very nice. Your writing brings out passionate feelings that I try to hide deep inside. You are gifted.
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