Needed: Beta Reader

Okay…I’ve got my short story done…I just need a bit of help, as I’m quite rubbish with comas and their grammar friends and what not.

It’s 4 Chapters, approximately 17 pages.
Chapter 1 has gone through my Creative Writing teacher, and I fixed what he told me to.
Chapter 2 has done through my darling Sissy, so it’s covered as well I believe.
Chapter 3 & 4 haven’t been looked at, at all.

Also, I was struggling terribly with the ending…And as I have left it, I’m not sure it ties up correctly or not. So, I’m willing to hear any suggestions.

So…If there is some brave soul out there willing to read this stuff for me, I’ll send all 4 chapters along, so you can follow what is going on…Hopefully. Just leave your e-mail in a note and I’ll mail it…Then mail it back to me when you’ve gone over it…I’ll be much grateful and very appreciative.

This is due tomorrow for my revision in Creative Writing, and I was also considering entering it in the short story competition at the college, which the deadline for that is tomorrow as well.

Sooooo…Please, please, please, please….Someone take pity on me!!!!!

*is now off to finish up that evil sketchbook for Life Drawing before Tuesday comes around*