Journal Exercise: Sensory Paragraph: Four:

And finaly…I’ve manage to get to this.

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Observe a routine occurance this week and write one sensory image paragraph. A sensory image paragraph should include all five of your senses and one use of figurative language (similie, metaphor, etc.).

She stared out the window, sipping her coffee, the vanilla flavor helping to awaken her senses. Instead of the azure blue of the past few days, the sky had turn a leaden color, drops of rain, like a thousand tears were falling to the ground. The scent of wet earth reached her nostrils, not entirely unpleasant, as it spoke of freshness, and renewal, after the sweltering days that had passed. The beating of thunder of drums echoed through the air, hearlding the coming of more rain. A cool breeze drifting through the window, helping to alleviate the sticky feeling of the heat.

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 Unnamed             December 1, 1992
The pain is almost
     to much to bear
This cruel, cruel world
     it never plays fair
I finaly found a love
     one so true and sweet
One nothing in this world
     could ever beat
Now it’s becoming a
     memory
Another cruel trick
     of destiny
The fates are cruel
     and uncaring
So all these feelings
     I am sharing

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June 18, 2006

thats such a bootiful poem… i really like it lol its very deep indeed and the paragraph is good i wouldnt mind some vanilla tea lol xxx

Wonderful writing, as always! Sad poem, though. *hugs*

I love the smell of the ground right after it rains. It’s my favorite non-edible scent. Loverly poem. ~

June 18, 2006

🙂 Be well, my friend.

June 18, 2006

I like your poems. They’re good.