Mamma
Mammad hit me if I werent right. Thats what shed say anyway. Shed always look at me and say, “You aint right!” Somethin like that. I dont know. I guess I wasnt right very much.
So, Im comin home from a friends house, and its about nine oclock at night. Mamma told me to be home round ten. So Im thinkin, wow, Ill make it by nine. Shes gotta love me for this one, right? So, I get in there and shes all smelly as usual. She gets up outta that chair of hers and looks at me glarin, and sayin, “What the hell you want?” So she screams this at me and I dont know what Im supposed to be thinkin. Im tryin to get home on time. No, Im tryin to get home early. Im tryin to do it right for a change. So I say, “Mamma, Im just tryin to do what you told me.” So I guess she doesnt like this much either, cause she comes over swingin’ her fist.
So, Im comin home from school, right? Right, so Mamma aint even supposed to be at home. So, Im thinkin Ill clean the house for her, make it all nice so she’ll be happy for a change when she gets home from work. So, I go to open the door but I cant. Theres somethin blockin the damn door from the inside. So, I start bangin and bangin, tryin to get in. Im thinkin theres some creep robber in the house tryin and take everythin. So finally I find my way in through a window and go to see what all the troubles about. Well, theres Mamma with the couch on its side, sittin against the door! Shes passed out and smelly and theres glass all over the place. I go to wake her up, when I step on some. The glass goes right up through my rubber sandals and into my foot. So I scream out, “Damn!” Now Mamma wakes up and sees me with a piece a glass in my foot. So she gets mad and starts comin after me. Im pleadin to let me take the glass out first, but she aint lettin me. So I had to take a beatin with glass in my foot.
So, Im getting outta the shower one mornin and I see this guy lookin in the window. Hes lookin right at me. So, I scream and yell for help. What was I supposed to do? The creep was starin right at me. You dont just stare at a girl like that! This aint no peep show. So, Im tryin my hardest to get the towel to stick around me so he cant see no more, but instead I slip and fall. Just before I hit the ground, though, I grab onto the cabinet and pull it down with me. So, Mamma comes in and sees the mess and starts yellin at me. She smells as usual. So she starts screamin some name I aint never even heard before. Shes callin, “Eddie! Eddie!” So, this guy walks in, and sure enough its that same creep who been starin in the window at me. I tell Mamma, but she dont listen. She calls me a liar! I tell her I aint lyin and that I wouldnt say those things less they were true. She starts goin off on how worthless I am again. And then she starts wailin on me. It was worse though, cuz the whole time that Eddie guy just watched. And I swear if he wasnt smilin about it the whole time.
So, Im sittin down to dinner and Mamma brings out the food. Now, I had been eatin whatever she gave me for two weeks in a row, and I had been gettin hungrier and hungrier. She hadnt been feedin me right. So she brings out this bowl of soup. But there aint nothin in it. Its just hot water. She sits it down in front of me and snaps at me to eat it. I go to speak up about the food, but then I figure what goodll it do? So, I forget about it. Then I remember I got to say this thing I heard about called Grace. I guess its a prayer type of thing. I didnt know too much about no prayers. But this kid at school said you gotta pray before you eat or God aint happy. So I go to say Grace, right? And so Im foldin my hands and closin my eyes, when all of the sudden I feel myself yanked outta my chair. Im thinkin, “Gods mad at me or somethin, cuz I aint too good at Grace!” But, sure enough, it was Mamma. She starts screamin about how God aint lovin me. I try and say I was sorry. I was only tryin to help, you know? She never listens to a thing I say. So, I say shes right and God hates me. But I start cryin, you know? I cant help it. I really didnt want God hatin me. She didnt like that though. She had to beat God outta me I guess.
So, Im getting hungrier and hungrier, until this one day I fall down. I fall down right in the middle of school. I dont really remember much, but the next thing I know Im at the nurses and my teacher is standin over me askin me all these questions. Somethin about me bein malnarisht or somethin. I dont know what any of that means. Im hungry though, real hungry. So, I tell her I just aint been eatin so good, you know? I figure Mamma just had some money problems. She meant to feed me, but if only one of us could go and eat, then it should be her, seein as how shes the one makin the money anyway. So, I tell ’em all of this and then they get all angry. I dont know what I did, you know? I didnt mean to fall down. So, I kinda wonder why they aint hittin me yet, but I dont say nothin. If they forget, it aint my problem. So soon my Mamma walks in, smellin and holdin a bottle as usual. They take a look at Mamma and say that she has to get outta there. Well Mamma aint gonna take that. No sir, she starts yellin and flailin, and everythin she can think of. Then she spots me and stops movin altogether. She starts screamin about me doin it to her. She starts yellin about me destroyin her. “I aint done nothin but fall down Mamma!” I scream it, but it dont do no good. She mustve been real mad cuz she threw that bottle right at my head.
So, I dont see mamma after that. I dont see a lot of anything really. That bottle knocked my eyes up pretty good. I live with some family that dont like me too much. They dont teach me nothin like Mamma did. Mamma at least cared enough to tell me how worthless I was bein. Sometimes I wonder about Mamma. I hope shes okay. I wish I had been right. I wish I wasnt so wrong. I wish Mamma was here to show me. Shed show me good.
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hmm. representative of many lives. very interesting. I liked it.
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I like the meaning within the story and most aspects of the writing, but not all of it. *gasp* I think this the first time I’ve felt such a thing about your writing! I can’t find the words to explain why at the moment. Just being honest…don’t hate me…or do…but give back my cds before you cut me out. Wait…I don’t actually know you…nevermind…
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interesting as usual…mayeb i should think of a new word? oh well..i think abuse is crap but people live with it all the time i suppose. it’s a pity..
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You’re absolutely right. Simplicity CAN give the impression of complexity…I envy your ability to do that- you’re very talented. And it’s good to know I’m flattering to someone, especially to someone I’ve never met. You’ve got a gift, keep it up.
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Abnormal, but normal… Good. I liked it. 🙂
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wow.. it’s a strange feeling when things hit a little too close to home for comfort..
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An added thought: Thank YOU for all your help and attention…I also feel flattered. I appreciate your insight, it helped me to talk to my boyfriend about the problem I described in my diary…and we resolved it. In appreciation,
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wow… ^-^ You’re good ^-^ Jeez heh made me think I like the story… like |blind| said it is a pity live with abuse everyday but that’s this messed up world I suppose…
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Oh boy, thats horrible. GREAT story, but yeah, you know what i mean, oh boy. wow. your talent makes me well up with tears.
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wow that should be made into a movie!i know abuse is a awful thing to have to grow up in..but what u wrote decribes so many ppl that hurts there kids and messes there minds up ..all i can say is wow!!
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