Undercover
I have been writing more songs lately, and here are the lyrics to the latest one. Copyright 2010
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Her voice was lightening as she lit the flame
My voice was thunder as I felt the pain
She turned to ice as she said good bye
I melted where I stood and I wondered why
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And it’s hard to discover
You’ve been left for another
Your heart’s undercover but you’re just holding on
I miss her laughter, the touch of her skin
The joy in my heart and what might have been
My empty wall yearns for her picture frame
The hollow room echoes as it calls her name
And it’s hard to discover
You’ve been left for another
Your heart’s undercover but you’re just holding on
Bridge
Her heart pumps my blood
I feel with her fingers
I breathe through her skin
And her memory lingers
Yes it does
My friends take me out ‘cuz they feel they must
I go along as I try to adjust
At night I catch her scent on my pillowcase
When I close my eyes I still see her face
And it’s hard to discover
You’ve been left for another
Your heart’s undercover but you’re just holding on
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This captures the emotions of that situation perfectly ~HUGS~
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*hugs you*
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Of course the chorus repeats, yes? I hear the music in the words! You’re a good lyricist!
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very nice-I could really “feel” it myself**
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Hi. Here randomly. This is written so beautifully. My favorite line has to be “my empty wall yearns for her picture frame.” I can only imagine how lovely it sounds =)
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awesome. I especially like the bridge. very original. and accurate. (I’m throwing panties at the computer)
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I pretty much love you for knowing that song. I LOVE IT! I found it while I was egotistically searching for songs with my name in it a year ago. There are actually a lot of songs with my name on it. Now, you should tell any prospective boy that knows me to learn to play that on guitar and play it for me. That’s all they have to do and I’ll do whatever they want. Hahaha.
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I really like the chorus and bridge. Not too sure about the verses, perhaps a little too hallmarky for my particular tastes, but I’m kinda anti-pop in some ways. Moon and June, and all that. But you have such a talent. I can’t imagine writing anything like that from scratch. Good on you
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it’s good.very emo.
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Wow…
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Hope all is well with you. I miss your writing and your stories. Take care.
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hey sweet thing – how are things?
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“Her heart pumps my blood I feel with her fingers I breathe through her skin And her memory lingers” I absolutely love the bridge. I know it isn’t how you meant it but I immediately heard the Lord talking about his bride from His reality. Yes it does
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Hey – hope you’re okay, you haven’t been around for ages! I’m looking forward to seeing your name in bold on my favs list again soon… ~
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Where are you? I miss you. I hope everything is well. Come back soon.
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Hope all is well with you
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Beautiful! Thanks for creating this!
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Happy Easter!
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ahhh, the sweet catharsis of lyric-writing. good on ya, mate.
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