Point of View

She was sitting on the edge of the bed, head tilted to the side, brushing out her long hair just as she did every morning. He always enjoyed watching her for a fleeting moment just before he arose for the day, but on this morning he had no work scheduled, so he took his time and observed her. As he watched the brush flow gently through her thick hair, he remembered the delicate scent of it the previous night when she leaned over to kiss him as they had made love. He wondered how many other men noticed her shining hair. Surely some must, and they secretly wished they could smell it too, just as he had.

She applied her lipstick, a subtle rose color, and as she did his pulse quickened as he remembered the burning of her velvet lips on his from their passionate love making. He wondered how many other men wanted those perfect lips for themselves.

She slipped on her dress, and as she adjusted it, she arched her spine and looked at back over her shoulder at her mirrored reflection. The dress was perfect, classy but with a hint of sensuality, and as she arched, her lovely figure strained against the confines of the silky material. He thought she was a vision of loveliness, and he wanted nothing more than to remove that dress from her sweet body and pull her lustfully back into bed. He could feel a smile coming to his face as she turned toward him.

“Oh Honey, you’re awake,” she whispered. “I’m having such a bad day already, nothing looks right.”

 

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this is really beautiful..

June 29, 2009

I have no words except where the hell are the men like you in my neck of the woods?

Mns
June 29, 2009

lovely..

June 29, 2009

I’ve come so realize that our perception of our outward appearance is completely skewed by our inner turmoil…aka PMS. lol

June 29, 2009

i agree with penguin. *smiles* thanks for sharing.

June 30, 2009
June 30, 2009

I really like that. is it jus something u made up or is it a personal exprience? either way ur a great writer…got any books comin out? haha

June 30, 2009

you are a very sweet man.

June 30, 2009

Can you move to Virginia? lol You’re so stinking sweet.

July 1, 2009

this is beautiful…….now if there were more men like this.

July 1, 2009

~sigh~ je’t’aime

July 2, 2009

awfully sweet!

July 2, 2009

To see yourself in the eyes of another is a great gift indeed… ~

July 6, 2009

I love this. ~

July 10, 2009
August 3, 2009

Very nice…