The place where everyone seems to be…

Lately everybody seem to have fallen into that same abyss,
Lately it seems everyone has felt what it is to be defeated,
The new face of popularity is seen as defeat,
Somehow we have lost on our tomorrow,
Somehow we settle for where we now lie,
At last we see ourselved in a place we never wanted to see ourselves,
The incesant pain that had been bothering us,
Now seems to be blistering throughout our thoughts,
Our words no longer hold that bit of hope,
Such a word no longer can exist within our existance.
Everything we write,
Seems to be another step towards spelling doom,
Since when have we been so afraid about a tomorrow,
Since when has love been something we can’t handle,
What ever happened to our unbeatable souls that we so much were proud of,
What happened to those words of wisdom everyone told us we had,
How is it that a simple act can make such a difference,
Who was the one who said that now would be a time to let our guard down,
Who told us now would be the time to simply give up,
Who told us now we could stop trying.
I don’t ever remember there being a light when we walked,
There has never been voices behind us telling us to go on,
We were the one’s that always held our own heads up in defeat,
We were the one’s that gave face to any fault that we had,
We didn’t envy he who saw himself in the mirror,
But laughed at him for being so superficial.
We have a gift we have yet to truly realize,
We have an ability we haven’t found ourselves to use,
United our words are not simple sentences and rhymes,
They aren’t simple words of anger or frustration,
Our acts are not those of heroic nature,
We are simply the one’s that have been given the ability to write it,
Much against popular thought,
We are not the least poetic of things,
We are the one’s the somehow embrace our pains,
We live them everyday,
They will live forever for we are the ones that place them on paper.
So i say to you little brother,
Keep writting such words of pain and wisdom,
Allow your own soul to recover itself from that horrible hole that it has fallen into,
Your words are your own salvation from such harm,
You are more than what you write,
You are more than what you feel,
You are the everlasting voice in anyone’s mind,
You are the one word that can last a lifetime and never be forgotten,
You have let no one down in this journey of yours,
You’ve simply given us the ability to help you up,
And again let you go on your own path,
Wether it may be happiness or destruction,
In the end you are worth the same as in the beginning,
More than anybody could ever know.

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May 26, 2006

i really like this one. how is it you can capture, not only exactly how you are feeling, but me as well? i suppose that’s a sign of a truly great writer. anyway, the message behind this is huge and powerful, and i love that. awesome.

May 26, 2006

haha. thanks. And we are not confusing! Guys are, because there picky and always judging! hehe. well most are. :o)

May 28, 2006

That is effing awesome… RYN: thanks 🙂