Control Freak

1:

Gagging on emotion

Ragged breath to breathe again

Livid red sets in motion

Agonizing over sin

Shelter close to bosom

The ending of the end

Falter often, wisdom

Live once, yet die again.

 

2:

Shake the anger

Shake the pain

Shake the hope

Shake the gain

Shield the youth

Shield the soul

Shunt the ready

Shunt the whole.

 

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December 10, 2009

I like what you wrote.

control isn’t everything.

December 31, 2009

ryn: thanks for the note. things are finally okay with my family. i’m actually so much more calm and less uptight (even my friends have noticed) since i moved out. so apparently some distance between me and my family is a good thing even though i love them. and i’m done with undergrad!!! how are you doing?