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This is a nicely written peice I would however recommend capitalizing your I’s 🙂 And change the first line to she has a broken heart.It does however have a nice even flow throughout.Keep on writting 🙂 Reviewed by Poeticloveangel

this is great my friend..reminds me of a situation long agoo..again u expressed ur self well..a lot of feelings poured in here..the flow was good..write on Reviewed by shylebgal

I liked the way you used your wording. The flow was there, so was the rhythm Well done If you find the time will you review some of my work? Thanks Reviewed by LKCGRANT

I find this interesting and I Like the feel of the resignation in the poem… heart -felt.Understandable and reasonably well-written I think. Reviewed by marilyn hutchinson

A poem which you were able to appreciate as an artistic effort. Something that moved you or stirred emotions within you. Good use of imagery, very understandable, very well written. A poem with that something extra. Reviewed by brentdoyle

welli may be curious to know all what may have gone wrong…but not to understand what you have written,your feelings.you expressed it very well.and i hope this could help you convey the feelings..in a way unique! well written…my friend Reviewed by krishna0306

You did a wonderful job. Love always hurts, nothing is never easy. I hope everything gets a little eaiser for you. Writing for me has always been a stress reliever. Keep on writing I loved it. Reviewed by poetrymom24

This reads as if you are the best friend or sister of said broken heart. The emotion is evident and caring as well. I can identify if this is so. Description is good. Reviewed by Donna A

Uhm, I think you almost made me cry…. I have totally been there before… You have a way with the pen… Keep them coming… Reviewed by Tina V

I liked your poem as it tells a story of Your empathy for your friends broken heart bringing your own back to you. I think you must be a good friend. I hope happiness comes back to you soon. marie Reviewed by marie2560