Just a thought

I talked to Steve’s mom Janet last night…she said that I am reading into everything too much, and I am looking for answers in things that aren’t relaly there. She said that the reason we broke up was just the reason he told me. I think she’s right. Maybe that’s why it seems so complicated. You know, we talked about breaking up like it was such a distant thing. But whenever we did talk about it, he always said the same thing. He said the only way he could ever see us not being together is if I didn’t trust him, and my jealousy got worse.

Red_James

November 29, 2006

thats fair enough…jelously is a dangrous thing

well see little things like that dont really matter cause a mean a porfessional editor is gonna rip through it and edit like a mofo before it makes it ina book anyways… maninly i just need to know if the story makes sense, it flows nicely, sounds real enough *for it beign a fantasy* do the charatures seem like real pepel for their roll in it, do i disribe enough so you understand what is aroundyou and thoughts and feelings… do i have enough info in it, are you egear to read more, things like that mostly…

i felt i needed more to it with a few of the thoughts and conversations in chapter 1.. chapter 2 needs abit of work too.. which is what i am doing today

RYN: Thank you very much truly. Read your entry.. Jealous is a very powerful force. Just be careful.