My Sucky Poem

Nature’s Picasso

Everyday that I step out

Mother Nature embarks on another masterpiece

She splashes the sky with the ocean clue

then delicately places clouds in the sky

as if it was as fragile as glass

To finish it off, she chisels the Sun to her satisfaction

As her signature, she meticulously blooms the flowers once again

Everyday that I step out

Mother Nature embarks on another masterpiece

She splashes the clouds on the sky

But wait!

She laughs at herself

She says, “This is what I need”

and proceeds to do over her creation

After toiling long hours, She produces MY greatest picture:

a beautiful summer day with no clouds in the sky!

Everyday that I step out

Mother Nature gently drops the leaves to cover

the Earth like sprinkles on an ice cream

She giggles to herself with glee.

She decides to color the leaves with great precision

This is yet another masterpiece from Mother Nature

Everyday that I step out

Mother Nature tickles the trees with the cold weather

and colors the grass with depressing colors

She sighs and continues perfecting her craft;

constantly stamping out her reputation as Nature’s Picasso.

I think it kind of sucks :-

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How can that suck?! It’s great!!!

joe stop kidding your self that was beautiful i love it.. byebye jeannie

December 5, 2002

Joe, what you talkin’ bout?That poem is really good 🙂

December 5, 2002

🙂

hey i think the poem is great! keep up the good work 🙂 talk to you laters Jocelyn

Its real good hun. Just one thing, u might wanna show it where it has different verses instead of all run together. Otherwise i like it. Cya, Lizzie

It’s fantastic =)

i dont think it sucks

:o)

how can you say it sucks? Ive always wanted to write something very simulair showing the way Mother Nature paints the world with the vibrant colors and energies I think it is beautiful dear *hug* dont be so hard on yourself RYN: trying to snuggle up with the blankie and cocoa =) celibrate comfort day with me? do you some good if you can =) *hug*

December 7, 2002

i like the poem a lot!! You should try writing more.