you can’t miss

there are times
when i lose metaphor completely-
when words bow out and all
i’ve got is this knowledge
absolute
that the curve of your back
against the open windowframe
matches exactly the ragged inhale of my breath;
when “like” or “as” is not a
substitute for should
or shouldn’t
and your nearness locks my tongue
to the roof of my mouth.

this isn’t personal, it’s political:
i’m waging a war
to keep my body
out of your bed.

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November 16, 2006

thanks. i was in a car accident and havent written in a LONG time. its so hard comming from a dry spell, ive done it by accepting im going to hate everything i write until im back in the swing of things. and- its good to see youre still around. happy writing.

November 16, 2006

“i’m waging a war to keep my body out of your bed.” i know this feeling all too well.

November 16, 2006

‘your nearness locks my tongue to the roof of my mouth’, and the last stanza, so wonderfully close to home. xx

November 20, 2006

simply fantastic…

November 25, 2006

I like it, as usual 🙂

March 7, 2007

Ok I’m adding you to my favorites, I hope you don’t mind. I must say that I really enjoy your work.