i know i know i know
scene one
opens i am watching the fog
roll down the road
creeping in and smothering
the ground with its thickness
leaving little wisps of white ghosts hanging
in the bare branches of the trees
wine from the thick green
bottle at my feet is
heavy reassurance in my hand
leaving my lips numb and my fingers
warm with my pulse
wondering which will come first-
sleep or
your breath on my skin
or spring
you know i will welcome them all
as just natural progression
or
exactly what i need.
hmmm…I like the last stanza. something about the flow of the words really works. keep writing!
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You do have a great way of using flowing words without rhyming
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Wine leaves my lips numb as well, though that was after two bottles. Waiting, waiting.
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