every time i blink

the streetlight
frames the oak tree
backlit,
poses it full-frame,
center stage.
my eyes are drawn back and forth
between it
and the stark white of my breath
hanging in the air.

i forget how winter
moves
when i look away.

she told me once
she loved me for my perfect hands
and teeth.
she would trace the lines
of my face
with her fingers
and call me "sugar."

i think i lost track of metaphor
somewhere between her sheets.

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September 13, 2005

I like this one a lot. k x

September 14, 2005

This definitely’s an interesting one, yes.

September 14, 2005

jesus. i think this is one of your best. i have goosebumps.