the road ahead.
I still cannot see the road ahead,
Though so close it has become.
And time does not slow,
Though I wish it were so,
So I could remember where I came from.
And I still cannot hear the voice that calls,
From beyond the wall of black.
But I feel the cold,
Of the ironclad hold,
Of the hand that pushes my back.
And I still cannot hold the hand that guides,
Through the winding path of life.
Its warming feeling,
Gives a sense of being,
Free from all of my strife.
But I can feel you standing there,
Waiting for me on the other side.
With your arms spread,
Waiting to hold my head,
And restoring in me, my sense of pride.
(that’s a “thescience” original)
Oh you, you lovely poet, you.
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VERY nice!! Only two quibbles – you need a better rhyme for “feeling/being”, and “sense of pride” at the end strikes me the wrong way somehow. But it’s a good poem!
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I’ve definitely written better pieces than this. I think I’ll probably leave this one out of the anthology.
Next.
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