Scream!

Life is a strange thing,

complicated,

frustrating,

annoying,

just yell,

break away,

cry out,

anxiety,

desperation,

ambivalence,

emotions,

aspirations,

things we all feel

we fall,

stumble,

crawl,

and break,

feelings of inadequacy,

we are torn,

as we drown,

silently…

WoW

Hi, I’v already made a comment on every poem here(i think)this is [changer] in my other diary… I have some poems on it and lots of ramblings… Thanks for you notes… S-

Hey I really liked your poem. Come and note mine sometime.

RYN: sure, i didnt notice it as the titles to one of you poems i copied it from my notes..sorry.. that was only partly a poem a friend of mine had and operation, something happened and they had to fly her out to Utah in the middle of the night monday. S-

i changed it around some, maybe that works better.. S-

well miss Piercing Heart, I dont know if you’v been to my front page, but I do have a website for poetry(www.stories.9cy.com) I have a scetion for guest writers, I would be more than happy to post your poetry there… I have had some poetry published in books and on web sites.. its strange to see you name on a book…..

…I could also give you the phone number and Email addy to my publishing representative. If you would like that..? Anthony is a very dedacated guy he could help make your dream become real.

What ever makes you think you had offended me, just cant happen..lol 🙂 ok here we go Anthony Schrock T 888.519.5121 ex396 email: aschrock@authorhouse.com Web site: http://www.authorhouse.com I look forward to reading more of you work :> S-

forever_torn

January 19, 2006

very good i like it

I like this but it almost feels as if it is unfinished. Did you stop yourself? The momentum is built up very well…I didn’t want to stop. Wonderful though, a good read.