9/5/05

If I were to tell you
How great you are to me
You would only smile
And disagree with me
So in writing this for you
I hope you’ll understand
That without your Lovely face
I just wouldn’t give a damn
When you read this poem
I hope you’ll think of me
And bring to mind
A certin time
When you were there for me
In light or darkness
Rain or shine
Your alwasy happy and gay
No matter the time of day
I hope by now you relize
How speical you are to me
How much you’ve made my life grow
And how joyful you’ve made my soul
So now I’ll say good-bye
For I see you everyday
And when I’m sad I want you to know
That your being there
Sooths my tourtured soul.

This is the only poem I’ve done that is not dark…. I know it is really choppy but that is because the words didn’t flow from me I had to force most of them out. So tell me how you think that I could fix it. thanks

~Alicesandressa

I know why she cried, dear… You are the most loving person I know… just… in a different way than most. I love you. And, you should keep in contact with that Mom for posterity (I like that word today), at least through e-mail. You two have a really strong bond… I must say, I’m a bit jealous. Of you, though, not her. *tee-hee* Love always. P,L,aO. Lurididae

broken beauty

October 26, 2005

very nice 🙂 i like it but if you want it to flow better, my advice is to count syllables. that’s what i do. maybe look up some poetry rhythm structures online, i know eight-six-four-six is a common one.