More Story – (This story needs a title!!!)

“Mother? Mother! What happened? Why are you sitting here in the upper hall?”

Kavia turned glazed eyes up at Arram and stared at him unseeing. Her skin seemed unnaturally pale in the harsh torchlight. Her lips moved as if trying to form words but only unintelligible mewling came out. As Arram uncertainly bent closer to his mother to try and decipher the strange sounds, her hand shot up and grabbed his doublet with an uncanny strength. Kavia pulled Arram toward her, an urgent, nearly panic stricken look now in her eye, opened her mouth to speak, and then fainted dead away.

Arram scooped his mother up in his arms. She felt light as a summer breeze and her skin was unnaturally cold. He was very worried. In all his 180 calendar turns, Arram had seen his mother unwell less than a handful of times. She had borne only two children, which was unusual in a land where only a select few were able to bear children and thus 12 or more offspring were the norm. Because of this Kavia had always seemed to have more stamina and health than other child bearers.

Arram stood in the hall holding his mother in his arms and looked around indecisively. He sensed that he should not take Kavia into the Crone’s room, even though they were standing right outside the door. As he was weighing whether to take her to her own room or to the nearest guest bed, Kavia shivered violently in his arms, nearly causing him to allow her to tumble onto the bare stone flooring. Arram quickly adjusted his arms, then looked down at Kavia. Her eyes were clear, if tinged with a bit of surprise, and the clamminess of her skin seemed to have dissipated.

“Put me down, you great clumsy bull-ox!” Kavia twisted Arram’s ear soundly, whereupon he gracelessly dropped her and began to rub his quickly reddening ear. A rueful grin spread across his face. He should have known that his mother would not be kept down long.

Kavia regained her composure, adjusted her skirts and swatted at her son. “Go on, go on! There’s work to be done and we’ve no time to pass the moon’s time here in the hall! Look at your clothes! Surely, you are not planning to wear that tattered and colorless tunic to welcome your sister! This is a grand celebration, not a funerary!”

“Are you all right mother? A moment ago you were not quite……..”

“Of course I’m all right. Do I not look all right? You have not come so far up in the world, young man, that you may question your mother with such disrespect. If you are not out of this hall in 3 seconds….”

Kavia never had to finish that sentence. Arram was already disappearing around the corner. As soon as she was sure he was gone, she leaned heavily against the wall. Most of her energy seemed drained and she didn’t even know why she was in this upper hall. The last thing she remembered was hitting her shin, and then finding……something. What was it? Kavia shook her head. Surely she was not nearing Dowager status yet. She was far too young and had birthed too few children for that. She had many calendar turns ahead of her yet. She had to. Joia must first be welcomed home and assume her position of Shayene before Kavia would have any time for rest.

Joia! Ashes of roses!!! Joia would be here soon, and there was work to be done. Enough drifting! Kavia began going over the list of tasks left to perform in her head as she hurried back down towards the Sechun Hall.

At that very moment in time, Joia was beginning to look for signs that her party was nearing the Keep. Surely her mother would have raised the 7-wolf banners of the Shayene, and she would be able to see them soon. Her father, worried like all fathers, must have sent an escort out to greet her. It had been a long and dusty journey and Joia was looking forward to a long cool bath before the festivities. She checked the position of the suns and moons in the sky, then urged her horse on a little faster. If she was going to have time to really enjoy that bath, she would have to hurry.

Joia turned to urge the rest of the entourage to hasten. Just as she raised her hand to signal speed, something hit her from behind with great speed and force, knocking her from the saddle. She had no time to call out and only just a moment to reflexively grasp her signet, and then to fret over missing her cool bath before hitting her head on the sun hardened clay and loosing all thought.

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Please, continue. Why yes, I will come live with you dear wolf. It seems a fair exchange, motivation for warm, lovely, southern weather! With a big 🙂 Creekatarnheim, nsi

May 22, 2000

Nice to see you writing again, dear Sunshine. With a smile…

May 22, 2000

I never stop writing Torin, I just don’t always share!!!! 😉

More more and more, that’s all I can say! I love your style, it makes my day… Hey! is that a poem? Nah, just a simple misteak…hehehehe

May 22, 2000

::laughing softly:: Yes, I understand. With a grin…

Hey SUNSHINE! Hope all is well!

No, why are you unavailable? 😉 Love, Lincoln (nsi)

Dang. What I meant was…No. Why? Are you unavailable? 😉 There.

More please.

Very enjoyable reading Sunshine. I look forward to more. 🙂

Yes, yes, MORE!

A little poetry and magic in everyday life makes the world go ‘ round. Keep writing!

need i say ? more , more . this is great 🙂

Wow. Really great, Sunshine. And can I come and live with you and Creek? I’ll be good! Hugz

Isn’t the name of the story Appathetic George, first adventure, Trampelled by hippos? ???? 🙂 Ifin it needs a title, then title it, that’s what i always hear! Thanks again for the chunky Monkey! Wooooo!

BBe
May 23, 2000

This is fun! I hope you have enough time to finish this soon! Congrats on the new job! It’s been a while since I’ve been here, and I’m finally all caught up. XOXO

*sitting on the edge of my chair, waiting*

Great reading there girl! Now about that title…it’ll come to you in time. Count me as a fan!

Mns
May 24, 2000

Ahhhh! This is captivating!

The rest of me is pretty good thanks, Sunshine!! Hugz

May 24, 2000

Pining for you to come back, Sunshine. Snivelling and looking pathetic. With a sad smile, dashing a tear from my cheek (facial, dammit!!)…

May 24, 2000

A tear would be much more dashing on your other cheek, I think……but that’s just one wolf’s opinion! Pining is oak-kay, I suppose!

May 24, 2000

Lovely story, as usual SW. But I think the tear on the cheek is a bit kinky.

May 24, 2000

Thank you BE – and don’t you think the world can use a little kink now and then?

May 24, 2000

I’m all for kinky, SW, but now you’ve got me wondering how the tear got on that cheek! LOL!

May 24, 2000

Now that truly is a matter for some speculation! We could ask Torin for details……..

The story is definitely shaping up. BTW, in para one, “the only sigh” s/b “sign”. Title: Joia de Vivre. A little pun, based on… oh, you know.

Wonderful!

May 24, 2000

Faithful Sunshine follower.

I don’t know what you’re doing for a living, but if it’s not writing, then you’ve certainly missed your calling! You’re a terrific story teller. ~:)

My goodness. You really should do this professionally. Just my oppinion, of course, but it is absolutely mystifying.