let’s break.

face this phase
facet of pace
faucet of peace
get undrunk holy
we’re just wide eyed
and feeling
sin to its core
the center of feeble choices
small polished surfaces
of our teeth
grind and bump
secrets away
face breaks
facet roughens
faucet chokes
there’s not enough
to pass this stage
to stride into motion
to be this in harmony..

rny: ha, i don’t really like to hear that, i’d like to think no one could come close to this freakishly original mind, but wha specifically seemed similar?

models for argos

February 23, 2008

less abstract, morehuman xox

February 24, 2008

hardly! you mustbe who you are what that is, you mustalso decide xoox

First three lines are really nice, because they are specific and seem well-wrought — but I wish you’d maintain that level of specificity and passion throughout. Hope to see more from you.