#3

**please refer to the entry titled ‘do it!’ for an explanation**

write about lovers who speak different languages, so they cant understand each other verbally [solitary_penguin]

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he tells her she is a rainbow
“arcoiris”, he whispers in her ear
she giggles quietly, and puts a finger to his lips.
the word itself tickles,
bristling gently against her skin.
“kiss me once,” she begs,
pulling him so close he can feel her breath against his cheekbone.
“arcoiris”he says again, and brushes her mouth with his.

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bravo! i had a feeling i should have picked a harder one 😉 i might have to do a similar thing pretty sooon, asking for ideas

January 31, 2005

thanks for the note, but, and i dont want to sound obnoxious, my better writing is online, because of stealing and what not, but i appreciate that you like what i do post… i really enjoy your writing, in honesty its almost like a female hemmingway if he was a poet, and hes my favorite writer…lol