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Ok, how about one based on my last entry. I ask because I think that you are in the age group that I write about – and your opinion would be of value to me.
Thanks in advance. [Peter’s Shadow]
when you’re young, it’s all about speed.
speed to school, to work, to band practice, to soccer.
we are here and now
(and that is all we are)
shivering,
the thought of a number, a statistic,
that means i am more of a risk-taker than i ever thought.
(remember the night we piled into his car, two in the passenger seat, four in the back?
it could have cost us everything.)
**please refer back to the entry titled ‘Do It!’ for an explanation**
Thank you so very, very much. You said in (what?) six lines what took me an entire entry to say. And yet, I think you did better!
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I’m so sick and tired of speed. x x x
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write about lovers who speak different languages, so they cant understand each other verbally
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