Eyes Closed and Flat-Backed
All the animals out in the woods
Are losing teeth for the greater good,
And signing up for the next great flood
With a ship that’ll save.
I’ve got broken hands and a snare drum heart,
A marching band shaking my bones apart,
And the cadence doesn’t begin but start
To stretch infinite both ways.
I’ve got kids in class making sense
Of all of our impermanence,
Advocating the elegance
Of life in a cave.
We’ll wear fine furs and paint on walls,
And we’ll hear the poetry in all
The rhyming words we can’t recall
That defined our younger days.
On the rock where the straight line bends
‘Round where the vault of heaven bluing begins,
The stars wink out, fall, and then
Lie dead in their graves.
I remember the way those passed stars felt,
Eyes closed, flat-backed on childhood hills,
Thinking that only time can kill,
And only love can save.
“On the rock where the straight line bends” I like that line. I dunno why. It just sticks out to me. 🙂 lovely 🙂
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=)
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p.s. can you turn on private notes? or do you like everything out in the open?
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the rhythms you follow are sometimes so classic, so reminiscent of those poems i used to read from way back when. after i read the stanzas i always feel a little bit likei’ve read thoselines before, even though i know i haven’t. i think it maybe because they sound so … right.i miss you.
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we had an uncle who lived in a cave once. we called him uncle caveman. he was big and hairy and sometimes he would eat one of us. later on we found out he was a bear.
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