Eyes Closed and Flat-Backed

All the animals out in the woods

Are losing teeth for the greater good,

And signing up for the next great flood

With a ship that’ll save.

 

I’ve got broken hands and a snare drum heart,

A marching band shaking my bones apart,

And the cadence doesn’t begin but start

To stretch infinite both ways.

 

I’ve got kids in class making sense

Of all of our impermanence,

Advocating the elegance

Of life in a cave.

 

We’ll wear fine furs and paint on walls,

And we’ll hear the poetry in all

The rhyming words we can’t recall

That defined our younger days.

 

On the rock where the straight line bends

‘Round where the vault of heaven bluing begins,

The stars wink out, fall, and then

Lie dead in their graves.

 

I remember the way those passed stars felt,

Eyes closed, flat-backed on childhood hills,

Thinking that only time can kill,

And only love can save.

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September 13, 2006

“On the rock where the straight line bends” I like that line. I dunno why. It just sticks out to me. 🙂 lovely 🙂

September 13, 2006

=)

September 13, 2006

p.s. can you turn on private notes? or do you like everything out in the open?

September 18, 2006

the rhythms you follow are sometimes so classic, so reminiscent of those poems i used to read from way back when. after i read the stanzas i always feel a little bit likei’ve read thoselines before, even though i know i haven’t. i think it maybe because they sound so … right.i miss you.

September 24, 2006

we had an uncle who lived in a cave once. we called him uncle caveman. he was big and hairy and sometimes he would eat one of us. later on we found out he was a bear.