Poetry Man

 

The college girls at the next table were talking poetry, and to my surprise, I could follow all they said. They discussed the sorrow of Sylvia Plath, the emotions of Robert Frost, and the passion of ee cummings. I knew them all, not because I loved or even read poetry, but because Celtic Woman had read them to me as we lay in bed late at night. Sometimes we made love with poetic words swimming in our heads as our bodies surged toward each other.
While the girls next to me discussed their poetry course, I remembered my own journey. As a young man, I thought poetry was for sissies. I had to read it in school and it literally just bounced off my hard head, never to sink in or even make an impact. I was going to be a man of science, and had no need for such sentimentality. Then I met Celtic Woman, a poet at heart, who had dozens of poems memorized and even wrote some herself. I was amazed when she recited poems I had actually read before in school, and yet had remained unmoved. She would read to me, her voice low, putting real emotion into the words and phrases, and new feelings just flooded into me.
When she whispered them by candlelight in bed, the writers seemed so wise, and wrote with such feeling, that I wondered just how shallow I had been as a young man to be unaffected by such beautiful words. I realized that for me, poetry had to be said, not read. I had to hear it to understand it, to feel it; and it was her sweet voice that opened my mind to such feelings.
I would tease her in bed sometimes. I told her she would have to whisper the lines of an erotic poem to me one night as we made love. She laughed and giggled back that when we made love she could barely speak more than the one syllable words we whispered in passion, never mind recite an intimate poem.
One night we were locked together, deep in passion, and I whispered in her ear that she had to say an erotic verse. She just moaned softly. I slowed down, letting her catch her breath, and asked her again. She breathlessly whispered into my ear:
 
"but this, in which there is no I or you,
so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand,
so intimate that when I fall asleep it is your eyes that close."

 
 
 

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November 11, 2008
November 11, 2008

perfect ~hugs~

November 11, 2008
November 11, 2008

this made me remember a time when poetry was in my life. lovely..

November 11, 2008

She was special wasn’t she. *sighs* Do you ever see or talk with one another?

November 11, 2008

words, words, words. have you heard, a bird in hand is much better than any number free to wander.

November 11, 2008

*smiles* that is lovely. i envy you. MUAH

November 11, 2008

Celtic Girl–where is she now?

November 11, 2008

“But when I hold you I hold everything that is — sand, time, the tree of the rain, everything is alive so that I can be alive: without moving I can see it all: in your life I see everything that lives.” (Neruda, Sonnet VIII) Poetry is good for the soul and an absolute must for soulful lovers. May you find a lover who can see in you “everything that lives.”

November 11, 2008

How very lucky the both of you were at that moment.

November 12, 2008

Do you know how rare it is to find a man who WANTS to have poetry recited to him–especially during love making? I’ve never found that elusive bird, myself. She was one lucky lady to have such as you.

i love you and i love this and there is no other man like you who makes me feel this. i’m here, always. -CW

November 14, 2008

I fell in love with poetry when I was seven years old. I’ve loved it ever since. This is beautiful. This is poetry.

November 25, 2008

it breaks my heart that the poetry you two shared had to end.

December 4, 2008

I found your diary through a friend’s diary, Mitzie 🙂 I hope you don’t mind me reading your entries….you are a really good writer. Your stories convey so many feelings… This entry is so beautiful in a bittersweet way…it really affected me…it almost made my heart literally ache! hehe. (I know, corny phrase, but I couldn’t really think of the right words). You write beautifully!! 🙂