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February 8, 2007

Hmm… that first part seemed a bit creepy, could be taken from different angle, from the way it starts. And also if read along with the title it reminds me of “see spot. see spot run.” etc. Or “Du. Du hast. Du hast mich.” I like the ending. I would probably do something with the title and that first line, though.

February 10, 2007

Thats really nice…

Aww, this made me feel sad… I hope you are doing okay.