the gist of pleasure
Your arms
enclose me like a tidal wave,
leave me like a drought,
while your eyes
hold my own like danger,
undo my heart like scalpels,
as your breasts
distract me like an accident,
ignite my breath like shock.
Your arms
enclose me like a tidal wave,
leave me like a drought,
while your eyes
hold my own like danger,
undo my heart like scalpels,
as your breasts
distract me like an accident,
ignite my breath like shock.
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Everytime you write something like this, I think of how much I want someone to feel that way about me. I wonder if I *do* ignite someone’s breath like shock.
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i adore wine. yellowtail is a popular australian wine here, but im not a huge fan of it. im still searcing for the perfect wine, and in my experience the cheaper ones are the best…
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this is so reminiscent of my relationship w/ my husband. the dark forces of passion and lust are insidious. the intensity of attraction is overwhelming sometimes. life is brutal. why do we live?
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i have an ear infection..actually in both ears… =(
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the day you posted this was my birthday. i felt pretty bad that day, and now a few weeks later, I read this and feel as though it was my day all over again…as though someone where thinking of me that way. You reach the reader beautufully here. “…distract me like an accident, ignite my breath like shock” Entrancing.
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“enclose me like a tidal wave, leave me like a drought,” that brings back memories. Though when you’re in it, it seems unbearably overwhelming.
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re read this poem and understand it better. it seems to be describing intense passion and attraction. “leave me like a drought.” what are you referring to..that the person leaves suddenly or apathetically or just that when the embrace is over it feels like a drought because of the intensity of the touch?
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I’m sorry to make you so dizzy. I’m trying to stop spinning so fast. Honest. 🙂
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save me from myself.
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I love this, Im stealing it for my love, its absolutely perfect:) XoXo
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