can i

can the sun be oh so bright 
even in this light it’s night
can this smile show oh so wide
deep within it’s soul has died

can the moon be oh so full
but in the day where is it’s glow
can I hold you oh so close
and still it’s you I miss most

can the stars shine through the night
why can I not feel their light
can I speak so many words 
yet they seem are never heard

can I know it’s oh so true
I am not the one for you
can I finally understand
alone is where I am to stand

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October 15, 2013
October 15, 2013

Ryn: its been treating me ok. Except for the power outage that has been going on all morning. >.< Im glad that it is finally cooling down. 😀

October 15, 2013

This feels so sad. I hope all is well with you.

October 15, 2013

I so understand the meaning …sigh. Great writing hun. ……..

October 15, 2013

Oh from such darkness you write Filling the void of empty light Open thy wounded heart To discover your inner sight RYN: Yes, JD is one of THE BEST. ; )

“can I hold you oh so close and still it’s you I miss most” I also love your background here. RYN: a positive aura, ey? I’d have never thought so XD. your poetry is very good, though I’m sure you know that :P. I often go and randomly read among older entries 🙂

October 16, 2013

ryn: friend request sent 🙂

October 17, 2013

Pretty wallpaper,cool poem…