A challenge by GreyWolf

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                High atop a mountain east of everything that ever was, lived an elderly woman.  Her days were filled with simple tasks to ensure her warmth and sustenance. The need for companionship was long ago forgotten, she was more than enough company for herself, she and her goat that is.

                On the side of the hill outside of her one room house, hung banners that used to be bright and colorful but were now faded by the sun and tattered by the wind. Words were written on them, words that carried meaning to anyone who might listen.  The banners flapped and swished in the wind. A cluster of pots also hung outside her front door, these clanged with a low throaty bang announcing storms or rain.

                Around the grounds were scruffy bushes of herbs and green tea. When the old woman went for a walk she took her  goat who helped trim the tea bushes by munching the sweet leaves. It made a good breakfast for the goat and kept the bushes from growing too high. A tiny rice patty gave her enough food to get her through the long winters. Her fruits and nut trees provided the rest.

                One day, as she squatted beside the well fetching water filling an old clay pot, a beautiful white dove landed nearby on a branch of a twisted pine tree.  The woman slowly leaned back on her heels not wanting to frighten the newcomer.

                Cooing in a whisper she asked  “Is it my time to go?”

                “No,” replied the bird, “It is your time to teach what you know.”

                The woman sat for a moment pondering the situation. Teach what I know she thought, what do I know that anyone will want to hear?

                “I will carry your words, like your old banners, to the person who needs to hear it.” said the dove as if it had read her mind.

                “Ah, now I understand.  When shall we start, how often will I tell you my thoughts  and how long will it take you to return, what if I run out of wisdom?”

                All the questions were answered except for the last one and because the dove never answered it, it is to this day that she lives on, her wisdom as full and deep as her well. The woman and her dove tell each other deep secrets and it is only up to us to sit quietly enough to hear the old sages words through the dove.

 

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Beautiful picture Thomas, I just had to write a quickie something to it. Thanks!

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December 25, 2011
December 25, 2011

Oh my gosh! This is excellent! *Wild Applause*

December 25, 2011

Wonderful story, Penny. However, it wasn’t me giving the challenge, that belongs to Linda Kay. I will leave her a note referring to your story. Be well, my friend.

December 25, 2011

And when her pension plan collapsed, she enjoyed the dove, roasted and stuffed with raisins and pine nuts.

December 25, 2011

I enjoyed your story very much…

December 25, 2011

This is beautiful.

Reminds me a bit of the lady in Cold Mountain. Living in contentment and harmony, in simplicity with nature…where it seems most sages choose to live 🙂

The photo reminds me of an Italian gramma who lived on my childhood street. Story and photo: very beautiful 🙂

December 25, 2011

Very beautiful. 🙂

December 25, 2011

Such a vividly descriptive story, the picture a fine finishing touch. Was this a writing prompt? Excellent work. Merry Christmas, P.

December 25, 2011

Such a vividly descriptive story, the picture a fine finishing touch. Was this a writing prompt? Excellent work. Merry Christmas, P.

December 26, 2011
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December 27, 2011

Very lovely story.

December 27, 2011

RYN: end of june. Rachel says she’s going to shove a cork in herself until the 4th of July, that way we have an Independence day baby, wife born on Veterans day, and dads a veteran.

ryn – no, I closed the studio before the Internet really took off, when I sustained the injuries. I am whole-heartedly looking forward to resurrecting it 🙂 I did architectural and historical flat panels.

December 28, 2012

very nice indeed 🙂