tomorrow is an assumption.

here,
surrounded on all sides by the
callousness and sterility,
the white harsh of the flourescent light,
breathing in this air that
has all the life bleached out of it,
listening carefully-
so carefully,
delicate and terrified-
to the mechanized beeps that echo and tell me
yes, your heart
is still beating on time.

i have never seen you look so
worn out,
so full of lines,
so small.

out the window, in the
dim grey light of november’s end,
the blackbirds perched all along
the telephone wires
and made little perforations
in the infinity of the skyline.

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December 12, 2007

I love your diary and your writing.

December 13, 2007

…random passerby… I have to say that your writing is beautiful. Hope you don’t mind that I continue to read some more.

January 8, 2008

I love the title.

February 8, 2008

I love the detail in this piece

September 23, 2010

I like your title, it intrigued me to click. This poem kind of reminds me of someone in a hospital. Was a little confused by the last stanza as I am not sure how that fits into the poem, but I like the word choice and vocabulary 🙂