Entry 601 — I Always Do This . . .

I start out with a new whatever-100th entry, and want to keep track of them from that point on, so I start numbering them.  I was actually doing pretty well with the 500’s until that stupid hacker came along.  I decided to keep going on numbering them, because I could fit the entries I could reconstruct in between.  But I don’t remember them all, and besides, it’s a pain in the ass to recopy everything however many entries over.  Though I really should.  Maybe I’ll start a new diary.  Repost everything there, with the rewritten entries within, labeled as rewritten.  God knows I’ve saved this diary enough times, I could manage it.  Hmm…  Perhaps I will.

Oh, I’ve decided to revamp Our Strange Duet.  I’m giving more of a mystery element to it, right from the start.  I’m gonna add a prologue, where the culprit is talking, cryptically outlining his plan, all the while holding Celeste’s cell number in his hand.  Then, chapter one sees Adam meeting Celeste, but in a different way than I originally showed.  I’m gonna focus a lot more on the development of the mystery, as well as the characters being pulled into it.  I’m gonna make Celeste’s Life public again.  Well, probably favorites only.  So anyone who reads this and would like to be added on to that diary to help me edit, please note me.  I need help on this and I promise, anyone who does help me edit, (and I mean gives me constructive criticism, not just says, ‘it’s good, we need more!’) will get a credit in my dedication.  Don’t get me wrong, I love it when people tell me that my work is great and they want to read more.  But I need more than that right now.  Or rather, I need other than that right now.  I need you to tell me ‘okay, this is good, but here’s how it can be better.’  Or, ‘yeah, that’s one way to say it, but tis makes it clearer.’  Or even, ‘who the Hell would say something like that?!  She/he should say this…’  And so on.

Anyway, if you want to help me edit, please, leave me a public note in this entry, I’ll revamp the other diary, and add you to the faves list by clicking on your name in this entry.  Thanks to all who help. 🙂

Bye, guys!