Advice needed please

So, here’s the thing. I’m thinking of entering this short story competition and I think I may already have a story to fit the theme.

May being the operative word.

I was wondering if anyone would like to read said story and tell me what they think? (For those who have read some of my stuff before, the story in question is called Alicia McFarlane: A Fragment.) And if you want to give me general feedback as well, that’d be cool.

Will

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August 3, 2010

I’d like to read it

August 3, 2010

I’d like to read it

August 3, 2010

I’d like to read it

August 3, 2010

I’d like to read it

Who
August 5, 2010

Neat! I just registered for an account with the site. Seems like an interesting community. Not that I actually write-write anymore. You consider posting the story on OD?

Who
August 5, 2010

Neat! I just registered for an account with the site. Seems like an interesting community. Not that I actually write-write anymore. You consider posting the story on OD?

Who
August 5, 2010

Neat! I just registered for an account with the site. Seems like an interesting community. Not that I actually write-write anymore. You consider posting the story on OD?

Who
August 5, 2010

Neat! I just registered for an account with the site. Seems like an interesting community. Not that I actually write-write anymore. You consider posting the story on OD?