Quick writing type question

It’s really hard to say without reading a draft!

It’s really hard to say without reading a draft!

It’s really hard to say without reading a draft!

Don’t go into too much detail. For example, how Angel mentions he had a drink, or two, with the Rat Pack in Vegas back in the day. Simple.

Don’t go into too much detail. For example, how Angel mentions he had a drink, or two, with the Rat Pack in Vegas back in the day. Simple.

Don’t go into too much detail. For example, how Angel mentions he had a drink, or two, with the Rat Pack in Vegas back in the day. Simple.

Don’t go into too much detail. For example, how Angel mentions he had a drink, or two, with the Rat Pack in Vegas back in the day. Simple.

I would use comments to introduce some humor during tense scenes. Like if some guy curses ‘jesus christ’, your traveler could say, “nice guy… good sense of humor.” would really make it a little funnier. Later,

I would use comments to introduce some humor during tense scenes. Like if some guy curses ‘jesus christ’, your traveler could say, “nice guy… good sense of humor.” would really make it a little funnier. Later,

I would use comments to introduce some humor during tense scenes. Like if some guy curses ‘jesus christ’, your traveler could say, “nice guy… good sense of humor.” would really make it a little funnier. Later,

I would use comments to introduce some humor during tense scenes. Like if some guy curses ‘jesus christ’, your traveler could say, “nice guy… good sense of humor.” would really make it a little funnier. Later,

The thing is, if he was at a historic event, would it have had an impact? Like could you stop a murder or save a life etc. And if small things carry big waves, what if his kindness convinces someone to change the course of their life? I’m not sure if time travel is really possible for that reason.

The thing is, if he was at a historic event, would it have had an impact? Like could you stop a murder or save a life etc. And if small things carry big waves, what if his kindness convinces someone to change the course of their life? I’m not sure if time travel is really possible for that reason.

The thing is, if he was at a historic event, would it have had an impact? Like could you stop a murder or save a life etc. And if small things carry big waves, what if his kindness convinces someone to change the course of their life? I’m not sure if time travel is really possible for that reason.

The thing is, if he was at a historic event, would it have had an impact? Like could you stop a murder or save a life etc. And if small things carry big waves, what if his kindness convinces someone to change the course of their life? I’m not sure if time travel is really possible for that reason.

I think it would be perfectly fine to just mention the historical stuff without going into detail, if the historical stuff isn’t the thrust of the story.

I think it would be perfectly fine to just mention the historical stuff without going into detail, if the historical stuff isn’t the thrust of the story.

I think it would be perfectly fine to just mention the historical stuff without going into detail, if the historical stuff isn’t the thrust of the story.

I think it would be perfectly fine to just mention the historical stuff without going into detail, if the historical stuff isn’t the thrust of the story.

I Agree with what others have said here – you don’t need to go in to detail about historical events, just make quick references to them. (I like Peter’s idea too!). Besides, if you don’t go in to detail with that now, you might have the option of making a sequel/series out of it by not using all the pieces in one hit. Hope that makes sense 🙂 xo

I Agree with what others have said here – you don’t need to go in to detail about historical events, just make quick references to them. (I like Peter’s idea too!). Besides, if you don’t go in to detail with that now, you might have the option of making a sequel/series out of it by not using all the pieces in one hit. Hope that makes sense 🙂 xo

I Agree with what others have said here – you don’t need to go in to detail about historical events, just make quick references to them. (I like Peter’s idea too!). Besides, if you don’t go in to detail with that now, you might have the option of making a sequel/series out of it by not using all the pieces in one hit. Hope that makes sense 🙂 xo

I Agree with what others have said here – you don’t need to go in to detail about historical events, just make quick references to them. (I like Peter’s idea too!). Besides, if you don’t go in to detail with that now, you might have the option of making a sequel/series out of it by not using all the pieces in one hit. Hope that makes sense 🙂 xo

I like Maikatellumaiel’s suggestion. I think a good rule of thumb would be when you read it back (if you decide to mention where he’s been) does it seem awkward or clumsy? I think you could get away with mentioning it in passing

I like Maikatellumaiel’s suggestion. I think a good rule of thumb would be when you read it back (if you decide to mention where he’s been) does it seem awkward or clumsy? I think you could get away with mentioning it in passing

I like Maikatellumaiel’s suggestion. I think a good rule of thumb would be when you read it back (if you decide to mention where he’s been) does it seem awkward or clumsy? I think you could get away with mentioning it in passing

I like Maikatellumaiel’s suggestion. I think a good rule of thumb would be when you read it back (if you decide to mention where he’s been) does it seem awkward or clumsy? I think you could get away with mentioning it in passing

In the Time Traveller’s Wife, part of the joy of reading such an amazing book was him describing his time travel and what he saw/felt. Same with Doctor Who, it’s really central to the storyline. But if the purpose of the book is to tell his story that has nothing to do with time travel, then just mention it briefly, but if the book’s about his adventures and consequences of those adventures, then you should probably mention them in detail. I agree with Maikatellumaiel above, too, though… I like that Angel just made little mentions like that. It’s more powerful.

In the Time Traveller’s Wife, part of the joy of reading such an amazing book was him describing his time travel and what he saw/felt. Same with Doctor Who, it’s really central to the storyline. But if the purpose of the book is to tell his story that has nothing to do with time travel, then just mention it briefly, but if the book’s about his adventures and consequences of those adventures, then you should probably mention them in detail. I agree with Maikatellumaiel above, too, though… I like that Angel just made little mentions like that. It’s more powerful.

In the Time Traveller’s Wife, part of the joy of reading such an amazing book was him describing his time travel and what he saw/felt. Same with Doctor Who, it’s really central to the storyline. But if the purpose of the book is to tell his story that has nothing to do with time travel, then just mention it briefly, but if the book’s about his adventures and consequences of those adventures, then you should probably mention them in detail. I agree with Maikatellumaiel above, too, though… I like that Angel just made little mentions like that. It’s more powerful.

In the Time Traveller’s Wife, part of the joy of reading such an amazing book was him describing his time travel and what he saw/felt. Same with Doctor Who, it’s really central to the storyline. But if the purpose of the book is to tell his story that has nothing to do with time travel, then just mention it briefly, but if the book’s about his adventures and consequences of those adventures, then you should probably mention them in detail. I agree with Maikatellumaiel above, too, though… I like that Angel just made little mentions like that. It’s more powerful.