Graphic novel concept art

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So, remember this entry where I asked for feedback on the concept art for the graphic novel?

Well, I passed on the feedback to my friend who said to say thanks as it was useful. (And that donut’s first note made her laugh.)

She also asked me to say that she knows about some of the problems mentioned, but the thing is she hasn’t got a graphics tablet (though she is planning to get one) so it’s all drawn by mouse. Which causes it’s own issues.

She also sent me more concept art and again gave me permission to post them here. And again, all feedback will be passed on to her.

So, here we go…

A revised Amy:

Catherine, Amy’s sister:

(I feel it’s important to mention that Catherine’s hair is pulled back in a ponytail.)

Dylan:

Melanie:

And finally Jameson. My friend is not sure what shade to use for his hair. Personally, I’m leaning towards the dark blue, if only cos he’s the Prime Minister.

Light blue:

Dark blue:

Let me know what you think.

Will.