The story.* my brilliant idea*

I walk in.I notice that my clothes are soaked through and I try to ring out my shirt as it pulls against my chest.I take off my shoes. The laces are worn thin. I have had quite a day.
My feet leave dirty prints across the spotless floor, but amongst the rain and mud from my walk lie the feintest tinge of a dull, lifeless red.
I empty my pockets out.a pocketknife,a large sum of money wrapped up in a plastic bag. My broken sunglasses.*fuck* I mutter.This is a more expensive pair this time so the anger is rising.
The phone rings breaking the stillness of the room.

I pace back and forth as I watch with dread to see if the phone stops ringing.

No..He wants results

. My fingers slowly curl around the reciever, I breath deeply and lift it to my ear in silence.

A rasping voice asked, "Is it Safe?"

I stood rigid and silent, like a deer searching the woods for a cougar.

"Is it safe," repeated the voice that sounded as if it had gargled glass to start its day.

Yes" I replied to this voice. It is as safe as it’s going to be. I hear the door knob turn.The sound snapping my head around towards door, as if a right hook had just landed. My mind raced as I grappled with the fact that they were already here.

I knew without a moments hesitation this could be my very last phone call.I put the receiver down. And he walks in. I try hard to not make a sound.Unsure of what side he is on. He walks by me.

Ok..Add on my dears.

(real entry is back one.)(favs only)

adios Siarai

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Thank you for the note; I like your diary as well, very intriguing! It’s nice to know that creativity flourishes out there

July 11, 2006

What is this? Are you making up a story based on other’s input/suggestions? Before I “submit” anything, I just want to make sure I know what’s going on. You should visit the forums sometime. Particularly, the “Forum Games” forum. I post on there every now and then. TTYL.

July 11, 2006

My fingers slowly curl around the reciever, I breath deeply and lift it to my ear in silence.

July 11, 2006

A rasping voice asked, “Is it Safe?” I stood rigid and silent, like a deer searching the woods for a cougar. “Is it safe,” repeated the voice that sounded as if it had gargled glass to start its day.

July 11, 2006

well not sure what to add on cause my little brain sure is not working very well this morning for me..maybe i will come back and try later..have a lovely day my dear.

“Yes” I replied to this voice. It is as safe as it’s going to be. I hear the door knob turn.

July 12, 2006

The sound snapping my head around towards door, as if a right hook had just landed. My mind raced as I grappled with the fact that they were already here.